This is a very serious review ok so mind your tone. What I don't like about this fanfic is that this story is inherently Anti-War, and a bit of Anti-Violence. I've become tired of reading Last Airbender fanfics that doesn't truly respect the theme of the original story or sometimes simply giving a middle finger towards it, and either just want to look cool by not killing a single person and look Pacifistic because 'it's a chad move', Saving underage girls, or both. So this is an attempt of this author writing this ATLA, And probably is going to go wrong at some point...
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LIKEDaoistpTXt65:Lol, yeah, if that was a joke it didn’t land. Sorry, it’s just hard to tell a joke from what’s not online these days, because some people say stupid stuff they are completely serious about. I can only hope the 28(so far) people who liked your post understand it’s a joke as well.
Are we remembering the same CHILDRENS show? 1.) There was rarely, and I mean RARELY any on screen murder. 2.) The whole premise of ATLA was for the Avatar to stop the war, and bring about balance to the world. You can’t get much more Anti-war, and Anti-violence than that. 3.) Your ending comments that something in this fic will go wrong eventually, but your first sentence was that you don’t like how it contradicts the original theme of ATLA. Sorry for the passive-aggression; you probably don’t deserve it. I just don’t like how you said it was serious when clearly we have not been watching the same cartoon. Seriously though, would you say he was trying to be a Chad by murdering if he was just murdering everyone he came across? There is not much anyone can do to avoid being a Chad if they’re a Chad when they are a pacifist, and when they murder everyone they cross paths with.
DaoistpTXt65:Are we remembering the same CHILDRENS show? 1.) There was rarely, and I mean RARELY any on screen murder. 2.) The whole premise of ATLA was for the Avatar to stop the war, and bring about balance to the world. You can’t get much more Anti-war, and Anti-violence than that. 3.) Your ending comments that something in this fic will go wrong eventually, but your first sentence was that you don’t like how it contradicts the original theme of ATLA. Sorry for the passive-aggression; you probably don’t deserve it. I just don’t like how you said it was serious when clearly we have not been watching the same cartoon. Seriously though, would you say he was trying to be a Chad by murdering if he was just murdering everyone he came across? There is not much anyone can do to avoid being a Chad if they’re a Chad when they are a pacifist, and when they murder everyone they cross paths with.
Not your fault you missed the joke, just read the author's review, it is a carbon copy and thus making the joke obvious since the author review always shows up first, you have to intentionally skip it making most ppl see this joke as a joke.
DaoistpTXt65:Lol, yeah, if that was a joke it didn’t land. Sorry, it’s just hard to tell a joke from what’s not online these days, because some people say stupid stuff they are completely serious about. I can only hope the 28(so far) people who liked your post understand it’s a joke as well.
He changed a couple words around, and made it so that what he wrote was essentially the anti-thesis of what the author wrote.
Lize:errr........ he just copy paste what author write tho............
DaoistpTXt65:Lol, yeah, if that was a joke it didn’t land. Sorry, it’s just hard to tell a joke from what’s not online these days, because some people say stupid stuff they are completely serious about. I can only hope the 28(so far) people who liked your post understand it’s a joke as well.
Did you not read my all of my responses before going straight to the comment section, and inserting yourself into a discussion you were clearly unprepared for?
Honoured_Writer:Did you not read the synopsis before going to the reviews