Problem for all Wuxia protagonists: Interpreting the right answer.

You can’t just give a review like that dude. You got a problem with something about the fic then elaborate. Telling people he’s stupid doesn’t tell the audience anything. Give us some decisions that he made that support your conclusion. Basics of peer review/ being a respectful audience member.

TM system seems like an easy way to bypass 4 move rule. Work with your primary 4 constantly, and repeatedly install a specific move with a TM when the memory starts to degrade. Seems like something rich people would do. Pay to win trainers.

Does he control the cup or the water… The world may never know.

God:

The author hasn’t planned for long-term quality. Issues I have with your fanfic: -Skills are not properly defined. You haven’t explicitly stated what each skill effects. -You haven’t portrayed the way those skills have affected him very well. For example, when you get very skilled at something the way your mind organizes information changes. The MC’s mental processes don’t change at all. -You haven’t portrayed him having multiple high level skills very well. These skills only seem to come up when they are relevant to the plot, and not when they are passively relevant. They aren’t active skills you use whenever they become relevant. They are a part of him. Examples being: A sculptor must have great hand-eye coordination; as well as a great sense of cause and effect in order to make sure that what they create matches well with what was envisioned, a high level martial artists sense of balance is much higher than the average persons; so much so, that they often seem graceful, a polyglot often makes connections between information faster, an artist that is competent in realism must have an eye for dimensions/measurements, a musician has a great sense of rythm and mood that can translate to just about any social skill. He has 3 of these five skills, and none of them are shown or commented upon once. -Finally, I don’t see how what’s-his-name attempting to save Makima will throw her off his scent. That is still not what an average 4 year old will do, and it’s certainly not in character for his previous incarnation either.

It says it on the screen… What is this guy doing?!?! Quirk 1: Talent Redistribution. It is right there!

That is true. Preferences are something people have, and are nothing to be ashamed of. What’s his name is of the belief that having stories about isekai with the protagonist being female is, ”the way to kill isekai.” Is that not discrimination based upon gender. It would have been fine if he said something along the lines of, “Yo, homies, I don’t really like this fic, cause the author isn’t making the FL super interesting. I’m dipping.” Or even just said something about the protagonist not being his cup of tea. Instead he made a blanket statement with no room left for interpretation that women protagonists when played in the isekai genre ruin every novel they are a part of. If that is not discrimination, I don’t know what is.

He ensured freedom for his entire country while being the fall guy.

I think I see where this is going and I can’t wait to read about Dumbledor’s expression when he finally puts everything together. Whether the theory is bogus in this AU or not.

Plains not planes

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Erens balance:

Also, who is this and what has he done with Harry Potter? This was supposed to be a HP protagonist crossover. They don’t even have the same name anymore, and they most definitely have different demeanors. The potions excuse could have technically changed him into a completely different person, but I came to watch Harry Potter not someone who doesn’t: look like him, act like him, have the same beliefs that he does, or even has radically different powers. Now, don’t get me wrong I like the potential of the seven deadly sins thing you have going on, but something in this has got to be recognizable; otherwise you’re just using HP’s name to draw in views while you are making your own protagonist.

Technically 11 years of experience, and knowledge on how the other 35 would have gone.

Is this a spoiler or a conjecture?

These are the first words of the comment below(they got cut off for some reason): Voldemort was caught in the the blast as well. Is that relevant to not?