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Dev_A_4178
Dev_A_4178Lv48mth
2024-07-11 16:42

MC is a complete cuck. Dude watched his girl get f*cked and took her back the next chapter 😭

TVD/TO: The Original Husband

TheOneAtTheMoon
3.7
24 Chs

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Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

Pretty good. Seems all these little kids are crying over a girl who’s not even real because she had a relationship with someone else when she thought her lover was dead. It’s pathetic really, I couldn’t imagine crying because the MCs girl couldn’t stay faithful 1,000 years after his death

1yr

Ballad
BalladLv5

The Story isn't bad and i like the whole Wizard concept. The only dislike is he's creepy obsession with Rebekah like this dude didn't even touch other women because he felt guilty for betraying Rebekah even though a Thousand of years have passed. All the while she pretty much jumped from relationship to relationships over a thousand years. I mean she thought he was dead so it's fair, but the fact he acts so pathetic it's honestly a huge turn off.

1yr
Raul_vaz
Raul_vazLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Niceface
NicefaceLv5

Reveal spoiler

1yr
WaitWhoWhat
WaitWhoWhatLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
deadimp
deadimpLv14

the story was going well until the part where he died , and it just became terrible. The time with freya and Dahlia wasn't great, but it was understandable, but the Rebecca part after just destroyed the story for me. i saw no reason of having it there if nothing was going to change except make the mc arrogant and stupid. to the writer, good luck. i know everyone has different tastes. im sure you will have people who will enjoy it.

1yr
Normal_Dude
Normal_DudeLv4

Story is pretty good the Harry Potter incorporation is truly great well done to the author on that front. Only problem I have with the story is Chapter 17 after Mc suffered an insuferable amount of trials to reunite with his lover, he finds her in the act with another man. Something rather normal as he was believed to be dead for thousands of years but the fact that the author decided to flesh out the s*x scene when Mc x Rebeccah s*x scene was left to readers imagination left to be desired. It makes me believe either the author enjoys seeing Mc suffer or is a c*ck. I truly despised that chapter and would recommend anyone reading this story to completely skip it. As it is simple cause for unecessary heart ache. But a scene doesn’t define a story as a whole so the story is still worth reading as long as you skip/rush over chapter 17.

1yr
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Cuck trash with deleted reviews. Pathetic

9mth
Kiramoon57886
Kiramoon57886Lv15

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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