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Iseeyou
IseeyouLv151yr
2023-09-21 07:13

Pretty good. Seems all these little kids are crying over a girl who’s not even real because she had a relationship with someone else when she thought her lover was dead. It’s pathetic really, I couldn’t imagine crying because the MCs girl couldn’t stay faithful 1,000 years after his death

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Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

Tho I have to admit author made the MC really simpy like and cringe. Everything he does is for rebekka and even totallly forgets about his caring sister just for her. I wish Mc had a personality that didn’t revolve around Rebekka. that’s my only complaint.

EyesightLikeTheSun
EyesightLikeTheSunLv2

Cringe how so?

Iseeyou:Tho I have to admit author made the MC really simpy like and cringe. Everything he does is for rebekka and even totallly forgets about his caring sister just for her. I wish Mc had a personality that didn’t revolve around Rebekka. that’s my only complaint.
Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

For example Chapter 21, 5th to last paragraph

EyesightLikeTheSun:Cringe how so?
EyesightLikeTheSun
EyesightLikeTheSunLv2

I mean yeah I guess so but it's kinda sweet too.

Iseeyou:For example Chapter 21, 5th to last paragraph
EyesightLikeTheSun
EyesightLikeTheSunLv2

more cringe than sweet tho

TheOneAtTheMoon
TheOneAtTheMoonAuthor

Thank you for your effective constructive criticism. I will try to make him less cringe from now on. And his personality WILL evolve over the chapters. After all, it is called character growth.

Iseeyou:Tho I have to admit author made the MC really simpy like and cringe. Everything he does is for rebekka and even totallly forgets about his caring sister just for her. I wish Mc had a personality that didn’t revolve around Rebekka. that’s my only complaint.
Lord_Shiva_
Lord_Shiva_Lv14

It would be fine if the mc slept with others, it just feels like the author thinks it fine one way and not the other.

Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

That’s why I said the mc is to simpy

Lord_Shiva_:It would be fine if the mc slept with others, it just feels like the author thinks it fine one way and not the other.
BlurryMoon252
BlurryMoon252Lv14

The story is just bad that is it. The protagonist takes to many losses gaining nothing. And the reason for our ‘pathetic’ behaviour is because of the protagonist bias. If you are searching for a more official term than look up Mere-exposure effect. I‘m not reading this story from Rebekahs Perspective neither am i here to look at everything rationally if i enjoy it then ill read if not then not.

Iseeyou
IseeyouLv15

Personally I just enjoy the novel and don’t understand why people crying because Rebekah slept with someone else. If you don’t like the novel tho I understand everyone has different opinions

BlurryMoon252:The story is just bad that is it. The protagonist takes to many losses gaining nothing. And the reason for our ‘pathetic’ behaviour is because of the protagonist bias. If you are searching for a more official term than look up Mere-exposure effect. I‘m not reading this story from Rebekahs Perspective neither am i here to look at everything rationally if i enjoy it then ill read if not then not.
DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

Prob because she “cheated” when mc is only about her and author wont add anyone else tho that could be a good point for a reason why to get a harem if author decides to regardless she cheats once she can do it again so I’m outti

Iseeyou:Personally I just enjoy the novel and don’t understand why people crying because Rebekah slept with someone else. If you don’t like the novel tho I understand everyone has different opinions
Straken
StrakenLv4

it's at times like these that I want a dislike button.

tg_best
tg_bestLv1

that not the problem blud the problem is after all that the mc is still a simp and love her unconditionally that act prove she does not thats all.

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