HELLO. THOUGHT THIS SPOT WAS LITTLE EMPTY. THIS WILL BE A LONG SERIES I HOPE, SO SUPOORT THE WORK WITH POWER STONE, BRICKS OR WHATEVER VIEWER USE TO SUPPORT THE BOOK. AND IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS YOU CAN ASK HEREN?!!!
new_bie_789
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LIKEAlright before even ready the story. Your intro, even ignoring the all caps was wrong. Run on sentences kill any immersion a reed has. It adds confusion. As a person who has TONS of issue with grammar and spelling I feel ya. First if you can use Grammarly. Second is read everything you write out loud. If you pause add a period. It’s ok to have some shorter sentences. It’s still absolutely readable. Also the welcome to ALEX JOURNEY to ect… it’s Alex’s journey unless his name is “Alex Journey”. P.S. Everytime I run into a lot of sentences, I get the song Gods gunna cut you down by J. Cash cause, (LYRICS NOT IN ORDER) YOU CAN RUN ON FOR A LONG TIME. (THE RAMBLER, THE GAMBLER) SOONER OR LATER GODS GUNNA CUT YOU DOWN. So don’t be a rambler brother. Gambling ain’t a good style. Don’t run on to long or your story may die. (This Deadbeat signing out. ;)
If U hit shift twice on android type keyboards, It gets stuck on all caps? Also Webnovel’s app is garbage to write in. Try grammarly. I think it’s every where.
new_bie_789:hmm I don't have PC😶😅
HalfazHipocrite:If U hit shift twice on android type keyboards, It gets stuck on all caps? Also Webnovel’s app is garbage to write in. Try grammarly. I think it’s every where.