HalfazHipocrite

It’s scary he knows the smell. And… it’s probably not a good one for a guy… to bad he doesn’t know a leaning spell.

I always suggest if you use ai. Rewrite it after. In your words. Pansey walking up to the most powerful person whom even the slytherin’s are a fan of because he’s powerful. He’s currently the school champion. NO ONE wants to be on the wrong side of the strongest business wizard right now. Not openly. The dude just kicked a dragons ass. They are riding a high. No if the girl tried to get chosen first. That’s ambition. What she did… could end any family connection to him at all.

Yeah… walking into a billionaires lunch like you deserve to be there… this is why you have a waiter pass a polite note. That’s the proper etiquette I believe...

It doesn’t flow well. There are a lot of moments that I have to reread parts of it.. again wth? His first deal with a group to sell an item is poor. His puns are simply wrong. Did your mouth teach you how to do that? Must be a foreign thing lost in translation. The stories rushed. Everyone simply nods their head at the mc with no discussions. Yeah let’s market a geneticly engineered bioplasm. No testing, just sure we’ll do that. One screw up and instead of just healing someone it could alter them. Or kill them. It’s also An anesthetic. So tons of red tape. Once again the mc says This is the best and everyone nods their head and says this is the best.

The was a statement worthy of the flash.

That and weaving a suit from thread would take forever. Finally imagine a strong villain grabs a hold on spiders suit. The threads are ridiculously strong. Could possibly cut through his throat if some one snagged his suit by the collar. This is why heros don’t wear ties. You could easily lynch a big man with a child’s tie.

What’s weird is he’s acting like he’s doing them a favor.

Need a way to get her in.

Newspapers were generally on Sunday.

Psshhh. He should be in a museum.