Review Detail of Dark_PersonJJ in Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage

listen to him please. love the constructive criticism but please do not be toxic about it

there is a flip side to this argument. even if people are giving harsh constructive criticism. it doesn't change that it's constructive and shouldn't be disregarded as a toxic comment.also, I hope for many future chapters.

There are plenty that aren't constructive whatsoever and are entirely toxic.

true but I wasn't referring to the toxic ones. just the scathing ones that are still telling you what was done poorly (in not nice language) and providing avenue for improvement (also not in nice language). I've seen authors disregard the comment as toxic simply due to how it's worded when it can easily be seen as constructive.

To be fair, most of the time there's no need for them to be so aggressive in their delivery of such criticism. It is still toxic in a sense, and could be worded in a much more useful manner.

true, but it can happen. sometimes it is aggressive right away, sometimes it is after trying it nicely for the 4th time. I'm not disagreeing, merely pointing out situations. regardless, it could get ignored when it shouldn't.

fem sasuke and fem haku these two elements make this story a trash level story instantly 🤢🤮🤢🤮If you like gay mc than write it as gay. Sasuke and haku are boys so it's hard to think of them as FL so it's gay.Do better Author 😔

hey

This is serious gatekeeping and childish. This is the kind of behaviour you see from toxic fans of K-Pop bands on twitter. The novel is posted on this platform for the readers to like or dislike. Reviews exist for a reason, you see. You can't dictate how ppl should give their feedback. Moreover, how do you expect the author to grow if you tell readers to walk on egg shells while critiquing. I won't be reviewing it coz it's a Harem novel. It was my mistake not checking the tags. Honestly speaking, I didn't like it at all and I stopped reading midway. As I said, I'm not giving it either one or five stars. I hope Harem lovers enjoy it. I've given too many harem novels a chance thinking there might be some story within the rubbish but I was always wrong

What you are saying, a purely negative critique, no matter how well-intentioned and constructive, is toxic. A critique cannot solely focus on the negative aspects; it must address both the good and the bad without exaggerating the facts. Otherwise, you are not assisting the author; you are undermining them.

is this a true or just a lot of girls likes him but no actual romance in initiated?

My problem with feminine Sasuke is that it deviates too much from the original.Haku is a side character so doesn't affect much. But Sasuke does.

If you don't like some thing, it is well within your right to leave a bad review or to "trash talk" in fact not leaving a review doesn't allow for a proper rating of whatever service it is that you don't like

Hello author, I'm curious if your fic has any yuri? I hate it so I'd like to know ahead of time so I'm not surprised

are you dropping this?

ooohhh, a nice and decent reader in webnovel. that's rare.