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DaoistZWPGFJLv11yr
2023-11-01 19:21

For me, this story takes away everything that bothers me about Naruto, I'm loving the development of the characters, the interaction between them, the training of ALL of them to become stronger The plot of some different things makes me want to read more and I'm loving each chapter, I hope it continues for a long time I loved the story

Naruto: The Right Way To Become Hokage

some_writer
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Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

I just hope those who will read this Naruto AU Story and they decide they do not like it, will just stop reading it, and no trash talking it all the time and giving it bad reviews. This is why many FF Die because of Toxic readers.

1yr

JManM
JManMLv5

I really wanted to like it after how obvious it was in the first chapter that the author had Naruto's personality down pat, but this story commits the unforgivable sin of being boring, and this aggravation is multiplied by the many 'AU' inclusions that read more like source errors. Finally, the story is padded heavily with lengthy character descriptions that feel like they were yanked out of a wiki. Overall experience: disappointment.

1yr
yokedjaguar
yokedjaguarLv14

Plot hole galore, trauma dumping every 2 seconds, and let's not forget every "good person" knows the difference between a sheathe and a Kunai. This is the most basic OP story. There is nothing different compared to the other 1000 out there.

1yr
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

The whole Naruto lore revolves around Sage of 6 paths' sons, and their reincarnations. Genderbend Sasuke just doesn't make sense. The characters interactions felt forced. We're 1 chapter in and author wrote Guy on a home invasion scene. Why tf would a Jonin break in someone else's home, and why would he volunteer in training Naruto? It's basically like this every time so I can't really immerse myself when everything don't make sense. The updates are good and the writing structures are on point.

1yr
Gamer_Otaku448879
Gamer_Otaku448879Lv14

WRITE ABOUT BESERK ABOUT GUTS GETTING A SYSTEM I WANT TO SEE THAT!!!!!!!

1yr
Arnab_Panday
Arnab_PandayLv2

Well, I have nothing to say. The author writes all of his work in almost similar plots. This one is even worse than the previous ones. There are many plot holes in the story. In short, the author's writing quality had decreased.

1yr
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Ino is my favorite Naruto girl.What you guys think? She starts to warm up to Naruto already.

1yr
Dark_PersonJJ
Dark_PersonJJLv4

Heloooo everyone in another story from the author Some_Writer. I promise lots of comments from me and like always lots of Pics and Gifs showing Naruto World Ladies.

1yr
Arnab_Panday
Arnab_PandayLv2

Author, you know I was with you from your Bleach fanfic. I read every single one of them and they were very good. But recently you have been making us readers very sad. You have stopped writing two fanfic and both of them were making good progress- I know that they were also lacking in some cases and I am not complaining. No one is perfect- but you just have to stop them without any notice. Now I am beginning to think you are doing this just to make us suffer. I just hope that you will not do the same in this one. Because, if you do then I will not only give you bad reviews but also write bad things about your book in every one of your writing. Also, don't take this as a threat this is just the frustration of a fan of your work.

1yr
CLOX
CLOXLv4

I have high hopes for this, especially when a female Sasuke is involved.................... yeh

1yr
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