Item: Reborn as Lucas : TBATE FanFic
Rating: 5

Random_OmnipotentLv42mth

2024-08-21 18:13

it's good but i don't like the way it's written like it uses too much Deep English that it feels like it wasn't written by a human i can understand it but i like it to be simplier

Reborn as Lucas : TBATE FanFic

Call_me_Baba

3.9

53 Chs

Liked it!

Replies9

JustHavinFunReadinLv11

Then, just learn to use your brain and learn some more English. I don't have any issues whatsoever and didn't even notice any "deep English".

1mth

Random_OmnipotentLv4

"I can understand it but" don't need to learn anything Bud i just don't like the way it's written maybe you should read my review properly first before yapping

JustHavinFunReadin:Then, just learn to use your brain and learn some more English. I don't have any issues whatsoever and didn't even notice any "deep English".

1mth

Random_OmnipotentLv4

Good for you for having no issues i guess?

JustHavinFunReadin:Then, just learn to use your brain and learn some more English. I don't have any issues whatsoever and didn't even notice any "deep English".

1mth

JustHavinFunReadinLv11

I did read it properly, but if you had no issues reading it, it wouldn't bother you.

Random_Omnipotent:"I can understand it but" don't need to learn anything Bud i just don't like the way it's written maybe you should read my review properly first before yapping

1mth

Random_OmnipotentLv4

we all have preference in the way the novel is written and obviously this isn't my preference but i still rated it 5 star cuz it's stupid if i rate it low just because i don't like the way it's written

JustHavinFunReadin:I did read it properly, but if you had no issues reading it, it wouldn't bother you.

1mth

Random_OmnipotentLv4

i was just used to simplier written novel maybe I'll get used to this type of style eventually but for now it is what it is i guess

JustHavinFunReadin:I did read it properly, but if you had no issues reading it, it wouldn't bother you.

1mth

Random_OmnipotentLv4

anyways have a good day today just feel like saying it since it's a great day today for me

JustHavinFunReadin:I did read it properly, but if you had no issues reading it, it wouldn't bother you.

1mth

JustHavinFunReadinLv11

That's true. Props for that.

Random_Omnipotent:we all have preference in the way the novel is written and obviously this isn't my preference but i still rated it 5 star cuz it's stupid if i rate it low just because i don't like the way it's written

1mth

JustHavinFunReadinLv11

Mine's okay, but still, thanks. I hope yours continues to be great. Ik my first reply was a bit much, so sorry for that one. I think that was my 2 am brain being toxic.

Random_Omnipotent:anyways have a good day today just feel like saying it since it's a great day today for me

1mth

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mahi_burLv4

Trash....................................

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Lord_AzathothLv4

It's the first time I have given power stones to a fic I don't even like. There are no romance or harem tag? The story is kinda slow-paced too, you know. I hope you can do something about it.Writing Quality is 5 stars - No complaintsAs for MC being kind-hearted, well, I don't know why but I don't like that, personally. I suggest you increase the pace of the story, that's it. 🔥

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ImjustadevLv4

there is a high chance it's A.I generated

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xAr4m1sLv3

puta de mierda de un villano asesino psicopata, mataste lo unico bueno que podria tener al quitar a "lucas jason" horrible todo. solo un fic edgy de un inadaptado social

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LunarWolf121Lv12

A really good fanfic. It has some dark elements, (like slaughter of bandits), the main character seems a bit anti hero. Love the overall development of the story hope you continue to write.[img=recommend]

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Neilsen_GomesLv11

author i really like your thought process for this story and i look forward to see how u progress with it......do u and dont care if some other people criticize it..

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