Item: Reborn as Lucas : TBATE FanFic
Rating: 5
Author: Lord_Azathoth

Lord_AzathothLv41yr

2023-10-23 02:36

It's the first time I have given power stones to a fic I don't even like. There are no romance or harem tag? The story is kinda slow-paced too, you know. I hope you can do something about it.Writing Quality is 5 stars - No complaintsAs for MC being kind-hearted, well, I don't know why but I don't like that, personally. I suggest you increase the pace of the story, that's it. 🔥

Reborn as Lucas : TBATE FanFic

Call_me_Baba

3.9

54 Chs

Liked by 7 people

Replies12

Call_me_BabaAuthor

check it out now 😂😂 you'll like it.😂

5mth

Lord_AzathothLv4

Yup, good to know you're back. I'll re-read it tonight.👍🔥

Call_me_Baba:check it out now 😂😂 you'll like it.😂

5mth

ACHILLESLv4

wait so is there romance?

5mth

Money_MiwnyLv1

Why does every story need a harem

4mth

GuYueFangYuanLv4

Why does every fanfic has to have romance and harem

Call_me_Baba:check it out now 😂😂 you'll like it.😂

4mth

BridgeToHeavensLv4

There is a epidemic of loneliness in men soo a lot of them crave what they couldn’t achieve themselves, that’s just how it is

GuYueFangYuan:Why does every fanfic has to have romance and harem

4mth

GuYueFangYuanLv4

You know if they just learn to go out and touch some grass I bet they will start to get along with girl and maybe even date someone, it’s really not that hard to find someone to date. They will not find someone perfect but still find someone good looking get to know each other and woala slowly ya gonna start dating.

BridgeToHeavens:There is a epidemic of loneliness in men soo a lot of them crave what they couldn’t achieve themselves, that’s just how it is

4mth

ArshiriedLv4

no harem yet and dont see it coming the mc seems to struggle in the romance area

GuYueFangYuan:Why does every fanfic has to have romance and harem

4mth

BridgeToHeavensLv4

Well its an easy dopamine, a lot of men are antisocial, have low self esteem snd confidence, scared of rejection or humiliation also going into territory they have never walked on before is always scary and stressful experience, a lot of them also see all women as wh*res cuz of social media, telling themselves its not worth it. But yes I agree with you completely but you have to understand everyone is different and has different experiences and well as expectations, which makes it very hard to go out and touch some grass (sorry for yapping)

GuYueFangYuan:You know if they just learn to go out and touch some grass I bet they will start to get along with girl and maybe even date someone, it’s really not that hard to find someone to date. They will not find someone perfect but still find someone good looking get to know each other and woala slowly ya gonna start dating.

4mth

GuYueFangYuanLv4

You weren’t yapping you good I also should had considered this point but at the end of the day if they don’t try they will never learn. It’s not there fault I am just mad cause there are no good novels or fanfic without romance harem and systems.

BridgeToHeavens:Well its an easy dopamine, a lot of men are antisocial, have low self esteem snd confidence, scared of rejection or humiliation also going into territory they have never walked on before is always scary and stressful experience, a lot of them also see all women as wh*res cuz of social media, telling themselves its not worth it. But yes I agree with you completely but you have to understand everyone is different and has different experiences and well as expectations, which makes it very hard to go out and touch some grass (sorry for yapping)
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Call_me_BabaAuthor

It's only a small portion of the big pie.

GuYueFangYuan:Why does every fanfic has to have romance and harem

4mth

Hugo_AdamLv4

no romance, single fml or harem for this fic?

Call_me_Baba:It's only a small portion of the big pie.

4mth

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mahi_burLv4

Trash....................................

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there is a high chance it's A.I generated

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puta de mierda de un villano asesino psicopata, mataste lo unico bueno que podria tener al quitar a "lucas jason" horrible todo. solo un fic edgy de un inadaptado social

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LunarWolf121Lv13

A really good fanfic. It has some dark elements, (like slaughter of bandits), the main character seems a bit anti hero. Love the overall development of the story hope you continue to write.[img=recommend]

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Neilsen_GomesLv12

author i really like your thought process for this story and i look forward to see how u progress with it......do u and dont care if some other people criticize it..

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