Review Detail of theanimemail in The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

So, I've now read past chapter 50, and I have to say that it's been pretty interesting to see the author improve their writing quality and general writing style. I'd recommend reading my previous review to understand my issues with all the chapters until around 50, but I have to say that, while I still see some issues with comma usage, the grammar as a whole VASTLY improves; the characters and world are also being further explored and given more depth, which is really exciting. Keep up the great work, Mr. Bean. *thumbs up*.