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I thought he would try to become stronger, but no, he does not train, does not test his body for strength at all, it is not clear why?! I thought he wouldn 't shoot everywhere , but would open his intelligence to know about everything, he has money but he doesn 't actually use it. Does it make sense to have a lot of money and guard it? Couldn't he have trained vampire hunters? He couldn't use money to change the Bible about himself?! it seems like a normal plot , but a lot of things are missing from where did the vampires come from ? Are there any magicians? Where are the werewolves? Vampires would hardly have appeared without magic! In short, does the author want to make hidden enemies for our gg? but where does he have enemies , what nonsense did the author come up with ? how much do I know at dusk vampires seem to take strength from blood so that it's nonsense that vampires burn from his blood))
The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)
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I don't really get what you're trying to say, but it seems like most of those will likely be further explored once the MC travels to further out continents. Also, um, I don't think vampires and magic are synonymous with each other. Oh, and I don't think money can have that much of an effect on something as widespread as Catholicism and the many other religions based on the Bible. Side note: I have no idea what you're talking about when it comes to trying to become stronger; if he got any stronger than he already is, I could see him being way too OP for the story.
do you remember who send him here there are multiverse out there and mc knowing it and he just forget about it if i know for sure something higher place is really exist i will definitely try to reach it
theanimemail:I don't really get what you're trying to say, but it seems like most of those will likely be further explored once the MC travels to further out continents. Also, um, I don't think vampires and magic are synonymous with each other. Oh, and I don't think money can have that much of an effect on something as widespread as Catholicism and the many other religions based on the Bible. Side note: I have no idea what you're talking about when it comes to trying to become stronger; if he got any stronger than he already is, I could see him being way too OP for the story.
I mean, I guess? Though the MC doesn't really seem like he places that much importance stuff like power, social status, or anything really related. He also doesn't seem to have a temperament that is in line with trying to ascend higher.
Raventan:do you remember who send him here there are multiverse out there and mc knowing it and he just forget about it if i know for sure something higher place is really exist i will definitely try to reach it