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Samuel812753
Samuel812753Lv41yr
2023-11-09 16:03

keep up the great work, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Also, what's gonna happen with demeter? Will he eventually save her or something

DXD: As a OC Primordial

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3.1
31 Chs

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Chuluo
ChuluoLv14

Kinda bad, first the mc name is Ouranos II it’s as lame as Bob Uchiha. Second the character interaction are bad all the moon god come to the moon the mc says bless the moon and they do it? Just like that? Gods are supposed to have a minimum of pride. Another example is making Gaia blush by telling her she’s pretty… Seriously

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ArtoriaPendragon_
ArtoriaPendragon_Lv14

No synopsis = Instant 1 star Review.

1yr
Saffon
SaffonLv1

Jesus, man, are you seriously writing something like that? Even for the finite logic of the world of Dxd, what you wrote looks like the delusions of a schoolboy. Although maybe you really are in school. People who rate it more than 2-3 stars clearly something wrong with the head.

1yr
unknown_20281
unknown_20281Lv4

it started good on till you made the Mc call Gaya mother I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that I hate that

1yr
NyxOuroboros
NyxOuroborosLv11

I would correct it to DXD: pathetic OC. . . .

1yr
DoppelGanger09
DoppelGanger09Lv11

The characters feel like machines the dialog is one dimensional, and stilted. The grammar itself Is awful, I have a headache just attempting to read it. The story itself is interesting and fairly unique premise wise. It's just brought down to illegible at best by the writing quality and dialog

1yr
Cryomancer
CryomancerLv4

Not bad.Keep up the good work 💛🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

1yr
insert_here
insert_hereLv13

this is just a really bad story, it is just not good

1yr
WML
WMLLv1

Bom.......................,..........................................................................,..........................................................................,..........................................................................,..........................................................................,..........................................................................,...................................................

1yr
Akito_
Akito_Lv14

the story is great so far can't wait to see how it progresses in the future

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