Item: The Heiress's Return: From Zen to Zenith
Rating: 3
Author: A5_

A5_Lv46mth

2024-10-03 21:39

a very good novel but 1) character building is good, could have been better for some side characters 2) translation is a shit because of which the story suffered 3) characters name change after some 100 chapters which made it hard to recognise who is who and also sometimes 1 character having multiple names 4) some "villains" r jst like cockroaches, and the same thing happening again and again 5) some random stupid characters popping up and staying but some good side characters (family of the FL) were never given a proper ending... if this novel is revised and naming stability is taken care of then 70% of the novel problems r solved

The Heiress's Return: From Zen to Zenith

Su Mu Zhe Yue

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