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Reika_Suzuki
Reika_SuzukiLv151yr
2024-01-22 22:49

halfway the story, the names suddenly change into foreign ones. it is quite confusing. the flow of the story should have been perfect with the original names

The Heiress's Return: From Zen to Zenith

Su Mu Zhe Yue
3.7
1638 Chs

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arenspade
arenspadeLv14

SPOILER!!! I just finished reading the raw of this and it was so sad, they didn’t end up together in their past and present lives. Ming Jing chose her destined path which is to become a Buddha and left all her loved ones bitterly weeping for her abandonment, especially Qu fetai who sacrificed his own voice just to meet her again. Thankfully the author got his/her conscience back and they met again in the future and hopefully they fulfilled their goals and end up together.

1yr

huahua
huahuaLv14

They should not give such ridiculous 'international' names to the FL and her family. Especially not if they cannot even use the naming correctly. Just use the original (Asian?) names!

1yr
MrsSkellington
MrsSkellingtonLv15

I don't understand why they do this. They already started translating this why did they stop and then restart it with English names? 😒

1yr
Latte131
Latte131Lv15

The story in introduction and the actual story are clashing. The male lead and family name of the female lead, isn't it wrong, or is it the twist in the storyline.......

1yr
Typheous
TypheousLv15

Got halfway through the book with the same names, only for them to get changed. No longer no who is who, or which family is which. Instant drop.

11mth
Tippy_1W
Tippy_1WLv15

Although I’ve read similar storyline, this book could stand on its own. Its a pretty good read 👍if this is your kind of genre, this one won’t disappoint.

1yr
Nina_Neal
Nina_NealLv15

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1yr
A5_
A5_Lv4

a very good novel but 1) character building is good, could have been better for some side characters 2) translation is a shit because of which the story suffered 3) characters name change after some 100 chapters which made it hard to recognise who is who and also sometimes 1 character having multiple names 4) some "villains" r jst like cockroaches, and the same thing happening again and again 5) some random stupid characters popping up and staying but some good side characters (family of the FL) were never given a proper ending... if this novel is revised and naming stability is taken care of then 70% of the novel problems r solved

7mth
TwiceTheJester
TwiceTheJesterLv15

The names changed partway through, throwing off the story and making it so I couldn’t tell what was going on or follow which character was which.

9mth
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