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The_Dumb_Dummy
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Alright, review time. So far, as of the 21st Chapter, I have figured out a few things about this story. Those being that this story is bascially going on the concept of 'Divergence' as in everything will be in chaos after some time.I am not sure if I am explaining it right but this is probably the best fic I have ever read as far as representation of 'Causiality and Butterfly effects' goes and unexpectedly or maybe that's the strong point of this story all the events makes sense. Like you can actually see what will happen because of the stuff the MC does.Also the writing style is really good and the name of the MC absolutely sucks đŸ˜©Finally, Writing Quality - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development - ⭐⭐⭐ (Three star because the development is kinda weird around the 19ish chapter, like MC does stuff that kinda doesn't make sense for him to do.)Character Design and everything else - ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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GuiltyOfSloth
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Not Now, Maybe Later.

ACHILLES:Is there romance?
GuiltyOfSloth
GuiltyOfSlothAuthorGuiltyOfSloth

Thanks for your kind review.

The_Dumb_Dummy
The_Dumb_DummyLv2The_Dumb_Dummy

Your Welcome (See what I did there?)

GuiltyOfSloth:Thanks for your kind review.
ACHILLES
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Is there romance?

The_Dumb_Dummy:Your Welcome (See what I did there?)
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amazing_games
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Harem? Please say no

GuiltyOfSloth:Thanks for your kind review.
GuiltyOfSloth
GuiltyOfSlothAuthorGuiltyOfSloth

Depends on who wins the voting.

amazing_games:Harem? Please say no
Syxenn
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Is naruto and sasuke born here or nah? cuz they should be, just without indra and ashura's chakra, since they arent really their 3rd life , its just they were host for indra and asura's chakra that means they are separate beings, so they should be born here right?

GuiltyOfSloth:Thanks for your kind review.
GuiltyOfSloth
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Nope, I am sorry if I did a bad job at explaining things in the story but Naruto and Sasuke don't exists in the story. It's essentially a fusion of Naruto and Sasuke rather than Indra and Ashura.

Syxenn:Is naruto and sasuke born here or nah? cuz they should be, just without indra and ashura's chakra, since they arent really their 3rd life , its just they were host for indra and asura's chakra that means they are separate beings, so they should be born here right?
Syxenn
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" what if Indra and Ashura's chakra never found their next host? What if they merged together? What would happen then?" its cuz of this that i got confused, but if its naruto and sasuke that merged than that would make sense as to why they dont exist, thanks for explaining [img=recommend]

GuiltyOfSloth:Nope, I am sorry if I did a bad job at explaining things in the story but Naruto and Sasuke don't exists in the story. It's essentially a fusion of Naruto and Sasuke rather than Indra and Ashura.
ACHILLES
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you got my vote either way i'll still read

GuiltyOfSloth:Depends on who wins the voting.