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SwordDomainGod1
SwordDomainGod1Lv141yr
2023-11-28 08:41

As of chapter 14, what is the biggest problem of this novel? The answer is everything related to romance. The pacing is bad, the transitions are bad, the motive behind the interest is bad, the time it takes between interest and relationship is bad, a bunch of red flags towards who will be part of the harem etc. If you're like me and want quality content, I suggest you either skip this novel entirely or skip every single paragraph with a girl in it. This book is supposedly a western original but everything related to romance feels like the most generic Chinese trash. Every bit of romance I read downgraded the quality of the story by at least 50 percent. I don't understand what's with webnovel and western authors repeating the same mistakes again and again. It's not enjoyable, it's frustrating, it's boring and repetitive. Go read some Sherlock Holmes, Agatha Christie or anything else for a more real and mature outlook on what romance is, anything but Chinese webnovels for god's sake. Other than that, the science is interesting and the story is almost non-existent till this point. It's just an endless slice of life of him learning and talking to people around him in an environment that feels like it will quickly lose its meaning by virtue of whatever the supernatural element presented at the beginning is. I can only give it a score of 3.2 after reading so much.

The Evolution of Genius: Every Night, I Get Smarter!

WorldScholar
4.5
134 Chs

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WorldScholar
WorldScholarAuthor

There is no more than one girl in his life untill chapter 80+, and a lot of the characters in early chapters are still relevant.

1yr
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WorldScholar
WorldScholarAuthor

Thank you for feedback.

1yr
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SwordDomainGod1
SwordDomainGod1Lv14

You're welcome... I might have sounded a little harsh, but please know that I don't have anything against you as a person, I'm just frustrated that romance in webnovel usually isn't as good as I'd like. I hope your novel can keep going and that you have success in your endeavors.

WorldScholar:Thank you for feedback.
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machadogbc
machadogbcLv15

Is the story complete or was it dropped?

4mth
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WorldScholar
WorldScholarAuthor

Shameless review from the Scholar here.This story is not simply about a smart MC who comes up with smart ideas and brings up technology to the table, as the mysteries start to unfold, and the characters change this will transform to a story about what lays beyond human reach.

1yr

Chaos_Butterfly
Chaos_ButterflyLv3

I just want to ask the author of his background in math particularly statistics. I am quite interested in PDF estimation using Kernel Functions, but I am not really familiar with Bayesian something. I am solving these equations for me to be able to approximate the PDF for a research study of mine for Social Science about the relationship of distance of dorm rooms and the probability of friendship. It will also serve as practice for me to be able to use the Kelly Criterion by plugging a PDF instead of just a constant. I will maximize the growth of investment that way even if the probability has some level of uncertainty. I am also delving into Beta Distributions. Actually, I rarely have an internet connection so I rediscovered it myself. Anyways, the point of my comment is not to flex, but to find a colleague that has the same interests. Namely earning money by analyzing probability distribution functions.

1yr
kokojambo
kokojamboLv11

After the recent chapter I must write a review, the mystery is gearing up which is nice and some interesting plot-points are incomming. The science is pretty detailed. Wanna see how the author is gonna continue this.[img=update][img=update]

1yr
Masson_Stephenson
Masson_StephensonLv15

The first few chapters had me thinking I recognised this from somewhere, and then I remembered another story on webnovel called Scholars Advanced Technology System. In the end, I enjoyed reading all 1500 chapters from that one, but I'm stopping here on C16 because these characters just don't interest me.

1yr
SwallowedTheStar
SwallowedTheStarLv1

I really enjoyed the first 14 chapters. The science is on point so far, I think the author is going for more of a scientific curiosities approach, at least in the later stages. The mystery is developing slowly. The hot scenes are pretty good. Some of the characters are interesting. I guess we have kind of an average guy becoming smart trope here. Will see where this goes. It's in the early stages, but I can't wait to read more of this. [img=update]

1yr
Brezer
BrezerLv14

the story is OK, grammar and such are OK. the story isn't bad. I guess if you are into scientific formulae. the formulas really annoy me, and the way the mc talks by using hipster terms is annoying. Also, he is a genius, but he's trying to talk like the cool him. rge story is getting a little loopy also. the story was OK to read for free, but I wouldn't spend for it.

1yr
Dark_B
Dark_BLv14

I love this novel so much! It combines the science and slice of live aspect in such a nice way! Additionally, the bits of mystery which are slowly added to the story are also implemented fantasticly! For those who know the novel, it sometimes gives me "Scholar's Advanced Technological System" vibes but written in a better way with more story building and more specific! All in all, it's one of my favorite novels by far! Post Scriptum: I hope the Author keeps updating consistently and doesn't drop this!

1yr
ryan_biggins
ryan_bigginsLv15

I was really enjoying the book. It’s a shame the book went to purchase only.

1yr
DaoistnqFGOI
DaoistnqFGOILv13

Started out good. Liked all the math stuff but story takes a nose dive in the 2nd half. The story is marked complete so I can only assume the end was the ending. That end was terrible. In other words if this was a murder mystery, the killer is never identified and got away with it. Read the free chapters and then stop there.

8mth
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