the story is OK, grammar and such are OK. the story isn't bad. I guess if you are into scientific formulae. the formulas really annoy me, and the way the mc talks by using hipster terms is annoying. Also, he is a genius, but he's trying to talk like the cool him. rge story is getting a little loopy also. the story was OK to read for free, but I wouldn't spend for it.
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