You are very talented, dear writer friend, please continue the novel, I really liked it. ___________________________________________________________________________________
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Automatic 5 Stars If this is what I hope it is.
for the use of the swastika, it is already horrible to choose this theme but the image of the swastika shows a deep disrespect or worse the absence of understanding of the history of this symbol and that this still provides to a lot of people.
my german blood is screaming do the germans proud author
I'll give it a try because I'm German myself, and it's just relatively rare that the "old" bad Germany is chosen as a theme, let's see how it works, although I hope you handle the subject responsibly and dont make fun of the Millions of deaths happened at this time in history! (I give 3 stars for now, depending on how the story is, there are more or less ...)
One of the most promising stories with good development from beginning
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Well we'll, let's see how this turns out. I've got high hopes
Author keep writing the novel it looks very good, we have the right to remember our history and commemorate our brave ancestors. Long live to 🇩🇪 from 🇪🇸 brothers.
It is interesting, and the concept seemed good, but I wasn't a fan when they introduced gunpowder/black powder in the story. I expected it to stay true to the medieval fantasy theme. The writing quality needs some work too, with things like mixing up 'he' and 'she' and a few other small errors. Also, why is the character still 9 years old by chapter 13? It's hard to see how they can do much at that age, so I'm not sure why hes so young.
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