The idea of the story is interesting and ,I must admit that, I like the setting a lot. It is different and more scientific than the usual storys, I read. All in all if you like something more scientific but with cultivation and levelling is this the perfect novel for you. and me [img=recommend][img=Feeling it]
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LIKEI read all the time, so I'm not used to commenting, so I'll keep this short.* The story is good and compelling, but for some reason the Arthur decides to skip scenes with no explanation. At least go back and fix that please.* The mc doesn't seem to be taking full advantage of his ability, he can make himself into a true monster if he went back and look for traits to add to his cultivation since he's is besically immortal. *it's boring when the mc hides his abilities like every other mc on this app, at least do something a little different.*he knows he's gonna get caught eventually but isn't really taking advantage of his abilities to make himself as strong as possible.
bro why did u make MC with average look, small pp, almost zero talent etc ...Why did Thyron even choose this hellish school in 1st place? he is a weakest looser afterall .... Instructors are all very cruel than any monster and phycopaths... though they are beautiful it will be very dissapointing if he have feelings for them. I hope not... Other male characters are introduced as devilishly handsome with great strength and talent, Our MC is a dissapointment comparing to them... What's the reason of giving him healing trait? are u making him a guinea pig 🐖🐖? Pain addicted macho??... System is useless for not giving him good other skill and traits for strength. Also please add SHOP to system .
ModX_Gamer:bro why did u make MC with average look, small pp, almost zero talent etc ...Why did Thyron even choose this hellish school in 1st place? he is a weakest looser afterall .... Instructors are all very cruel than any monster and phycopaths... though they are beautiful it will be very dissapointing if he have feelings for them. I hope not... Other male characters are introduced as devilishly handsome with great strength and talent, Our MC is a dissapointment comparing to them... What's the reason of giving him healing trait? are u making him a guinea pig 🐖🐖? Pain addicted macho??... System is useless for not giving him good other skill and traits for strength. Also please add SHOP to system .
also since he's healing, shouldn't he heal back stronger than before ? more handsome ? and he can controle his healing but can't adjust his body ? seems like there are alot of things that the mc is overlooking about his abilities in order to keep a low profile.
Snowking333:I read all the time, so I'm not used to commenting, so I'll keep this short.* The story is good and compelling, but for some reason the Arthur decides to skip scenes with no explanation. At least go back and fix that please.* The mc doesn't seem to be taking full advantage of his ability, he can make himself into a true monster if he went back and look for traits to add to his cultivation since he's is besically immortal. *it's boring when the mc hides his abilities like every other mc on this app, at least do something a little different.*he knows he's gonna get caught eventually but isn't really taking advantage of his abilities to make himself as strong as possible.