Zara010

This novel has a good potential but the grammar and phrasing of sentences is to messed up, some words are used incorrectly and the characters feels like NPCs some are just mentioned once and never mentioned again. The solution to this novel is proof reading, you either hire someone to proof read your novel or use some program to correct it because it feels like machine translation

Don't use just kidding

?

He just told you to stop he didn't say i don't believe you

Life essence?

At first it was fifty then you changed it to five now you make it five hundred?

Fifty*

So what was in the box

Where did this Chinese name come from?

Will become*