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Patrick_Stoudamire
Patrick_StoudamireLv41yr
2024-01-23 03:07

I had to write a review after binge reading up to chapter 130 in a day! The story is written really well and the translation is excellent with a few mistakes but hardly noticeable. World building to character design is amazing and around chapter 100 it takes off like a rocket. I look forward to reading more and I will be looking at this authors other works!

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monster54
monster54Lv1

como que traducción puedes explicar eso?

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CerberusX
CerberusXLv15

it's missing an entire chapter!

ACE_KinGz
ACE_KinGzLv14

bulls#t review !

Zephyy
ZephyyLv15

Hardly noticeable? A chapter missing, typo errors nearly every 5 sentences. Sometimes repeating the same sentences....

Patrick_Stoudamire
Patrick_StoudamireLv4

Ya I think I am just use to reading stuff in here and my brain automatically changes it to the right words lol my bad I just like the idea of the story I can see how it was misleading

Zephyy:Hardly noticeable? A chapter missing, typo errors nearly every 5 sentences. Sometimes repeating the same sentences....
Magicalicious
MagicaliciousLv4

is it a translation? can you tell where can i find the raws?

Azrael_DAngel
Azrael_DAngelLv14

did we read same novel? 😹

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