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VenerableShalltear
VenerableShalltearLv141yr
2023-11-19 07:49

Actually quite good but multiple grammar mistakes, spelling mistakes, and simply skipped content completely ruins the experience. It is very unbearable too read because the story itself is very good.

I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster

RagingArtPunk
4.5
449 Chs

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Black_Domain
Black_DomainLv3

bro why did u make MC with average look, small pp, almost zero talent etc ...Why did Thyron even choose this hellish school in 1st place? he is a weakest looser afterall .... Instructors are all very cruel than any monster and phycopaths... though they are beautiful it will be very dissapointing if he have feelings for them. I hope not... Other male characters are introduced as devilishly handsome with great strength and talent, Our MC is a dissapointment comparing to them... What's the reason of giving him healing trait? are u making him a guinea pig 🐖🐖? Pain addicted macho??... System is useless for not giving him good other skill and traits for strength. Also please add SHOP to system .

1yr
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RagingArtPunk
RagingArtPunkAuthor

Do you think shop will help ? Moreover, he possess tiger form, demon form, dragon form which has eventually made him handsome and made his pp bigger... If he wanted, he could trasfirmyand use his pp to destroy any pusi he likes...

Black_Domain:bro why did u make MC with average look, small pp, almost zero talent etc ...Why did Thyron even choose this hellish school in 1st place? he is a weakest looser afterall .... Instructors are all very cruel than any monster and phycopaths... though they are beautiful it will be very dissapointing if he have feelings for them. I hope not... Other male characters are introduced as devilishly handsome with great strength and talent, Our MC is a dissapointment comparing to them... What's the reason of giving him healing trait? are u making him a guinea pig 🐖🐖? Pain addicted macho??... System is useless for not giving him good other skill and traits for strength. Also please add SHOP to system .
1yr
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Black_Domain
Black_DomainLv3

oh, during transformation he could even drill a mountain lol... even so, he need a real complete body rebuild and reborn to increase his charm & his own b parts. I hope author to do something about it...

RagingArtPunk:Do you think shop will help ? Moreover, he possess tiger form, demon form, dragon form which has eventually made him handsome and made his pp bigger... If he wanted, he could trasfirmyand use his pp to destroy any pusi he likes...
1yr
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Black_Domain
Black_DomainLv3

maybe as he improve and upgrade his genes and cells to a limit, in next system upgrade it provides a reborn function. He will be a devilish handsome lady killer... who knows ..... hehe ..

RagingArtPunk:Do you think shop will help ? Moreover, he possess tiger form, demon form, dragon form which has eventually made him handsome and made his pp bigger... If he wanted, he could trasfirmyand use his pp to destroy any pusi he likes...
1yr
2
hot_papichulo
hot_papichuloLv15

Yoo how many chapters do you plan to write ?? Cuz it seems like there’s sooooo much more to explore and so far I like it. So I’m sorta curious is the story gonna be on the longer side or shorter side ?

RagingArtPunk:Do you think shop will help ? Moreover, he possess tiger form, demon form, dragon form which has eventually made him handsome and made his pp bigger... If he wanted, he could trasfirmyand use his pp to destroy any pusi he likes...
1yr
1
RagingArtPunk
RagingArtPunkAuthor

Longer side ... 1k +

hot_papichulo:Yoo how many chapters do you plan to write ?? Cuz it seems like there’s sooooo much more to explore and so far I like it. So I’m sorta curious is the story gonna be on the longer side or shorter side ?
1yr
1
hot_papichulo
hot_papichuloLv15

Ok ok, appreciate the response. And keep up the good work

RagingArtPunk:Longer side ... 1k +
1yr
mystery_anonymous
mystery_anonymousLv3

please read my new novel "The end of world has not yet begun, the system is activated in advance"

1yr
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Asterrod
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The idea of the story is interesting and ,I must admit that, I like the setting a lot. It is different and more scientific than the usual storys, I read. All in all if you like something more scientific but with cultivation and levelling is this the perfect novel for you. and me [img=recommend][img=Feeling it]

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Patrick_Stoudamire
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I had to write a review after binge reading up to chapter 130 in a day! The story is written really well and the translation is excellent with a few mistakes but hardly noticeable. World building to character design is amazing and around chapter 100 it takes off like a rocket. I look forward to reading more and I will be looking at this authors other works!

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Daoist_DarkinRyu
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Killing for no reason ? as an instructor ? just because you are seductive and beautiful doesn't mean you can escape the death penalty, thuii what a mongrel Keisha.

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BL00DY
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Mistake after mistake + hard to read logic.

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some_random_person_7621
some_random_person_7621Lv14

Story is great, mc doesn’t have x10,000 regen but nigh immortality, also grammar might be a bit off but it’s nonetheless great.

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NubiGuy
NubiGuyLv13

In ch 43 The Story is Great and Steady.it has a few mistakes in the writing but overallit's great!

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Jkesse
JkesseLv14

please get and editor. your grammer and sentence structure need alot of work.

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aditya_jujgar
aditya_jujgarLv2

i think author should have atleast told the name of the guy who got reincarnated, there is not much info about him, also please tell the diffrent ranks of beast and superhumansi got confused like who is more powerful than who[img=Why][img=Why]. overall it is good, just need a bit more detailed explanations about some things

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lordlighthh
lordlighthhLv4

It is a good read where MC is not an idiot and gets overall good development . Power levels are messed up with very weird distinctions but that can be overlooked why 2.5 stars then ? Author loves milking episode where the first half of every episode is copy paste from last..... So 1 star to both update stability and writing quality

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