Honestly the story is good but it's very similar to my bloodline system. In the beginning there where just references but then there suddenly where a lot of copies like the drill training. The grammar is terrible especially the first 30 chapters, after that it'll get slightly better. It's not unreadable but sometimes you have to stop and think to understand what was meant to say by that. Still Al in all it's still quite enjoyable, I just wished there where some self made aspects, not inspired by a book of the same genre. I'll probably, if I don't drop this one, make another review in a few chapters, currently I'm around chap 60.
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LIKEI'm now at chap 145 and honestly the story is very good but the grammar is an eye sore. Things like gone > gwone or believing > biliving are rather common so if you want a good story and good grammar this is not for you. Also a massive problem is that the author has problems with names and stats like Mason > Aildris or he got 3 level up cards and a few chap later he suddenly only has 2. So if you lack patience don't bother reading this one. Now the good part is, that the story is very good. I like it and it's been long since I enjoyed a story that much. The fact that the author is using well known figures as references for characters like Gojo makes the novel more like able in my eyes. All in all don't bother reading if you want good grammar and good story or if you lack patience. If you search for a casual read with an exciting story this might be worth a try.
