Overall, the story as far as I read is a fun progression, with nice world building done. The interaction of the three main characters is nicely showcased and the conversations are always nice to read through. The buildup about the world history, hints about the 1st world, 2nd worlds create a good tone to start this story. Especially the raw emotions reflected during the starting help to draw in the reader. Great job and keep up with the work.
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