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2024-03-02 14:13

The story moves too slowly with unnecessary repetition of same type of statements from secondary characters. The core idea is interesting but after 77 chapters there has hardly been any advancement, so getting very bored. Please edit this story to make the pace faster without all the excess weight.

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