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Lakshmi_Lakshmi_7422Lv141yr
2024-02-09 18:39

I thought the ML would be Xiao Yishen but you made third brother as ML. Even if we consider the title, it should be Second brother as ML since he's apt to mountain man. Also from first onwards it had been Second brother who's with FL. I didn't like it at all. I wasted my time reading the story. Who wants Second brother as ML, you people don't waste your time by reading this story. Sorry, Author but I am so disappointed

The Spirited Daughter-in-law and the Mountain Man

Southern Wind
3.5
1423 Chs

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LadybirdFlyLv15

I agree; initially, I identified with the elder brother as Mountain Man. But then I had to remind myself that all three men are from the same household living at the base of a mountain. Therefore, I am not going to be so frustrated by the poor AI translation of the ML. My dissatisfaction with the title is the description of Daughter-in-law, the FL clearly isn't one. I can reluctantly accept the slow burn 'romance', but there are so many plot quagmire. It is very difficult to get past the blindfolded polygamy bottleneck. It is a mental torment to find much affection and chemistry for any couple combination. At one point, an ink stone is sharpened, and it accurately reflects the relationship between the FL and the ML. I do not feel that the book is a great one, nor do I think that I have completely wasted time, coins, and effort during this experience. I have been entertained, but I have spent too much time walking within the character development maze to feel satisfied with the center and celebrate.

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StupidApple0Lv14

Well it's a slow burn romance. I couldn't stomach that she had 3 husbands so I went to read raws. After digesting all the chapters i had reached 500 finally she knew. I actually liked the elder brother but after understanding the heroines personality I understood why she chose her husband. I don't have the patience to read whole. It's for those reader who likes slow romance. ML and FL compliment each other that's why they are together. This character design of other two brothers is really something. First impression shouldn't be the criteria for your whole judgement about the characters,this I have learned from this novel. I now know not to jump at the first person who has given you warmth.

1yr
11
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TackcaTLv13

Excellent story, but please release more chapters at a time!!!!!

1yr
10
Baba03angelLv15

The story has been a pretty good read. It's a bit on the slower end when developing the story but it's gradually growing. Hope to read more! keep up the good work! ❤️

1yr
5
nadz_4lifeLv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
3
johnnamontefalcoLv4

5 stars because Xiao Yuchuan is the best!!!!

10mth
2
jaygrandsonLv3

sorry but the progress of the storry is really slow and there's so much misunderstandings and the sypnosis didn't say that she has multiple husbands i really don't like it so i'm not gonna continue reading it even if it's free[img=disgusted]

1yr
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hudasamreen22Lv12

it's good my time is flying reading this[img=update][img=recommend]

1yr
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LadybirdFlyLv15

This is a slow burn. The reverse harem has several layers that unfold very late. Not all is what it seems. The characters are not completely cookie-cutter templates. A small criticism, I think the title may be inaccurately translated because it describes the FL as [daughter-in-law]. It should be corrected to be [sister-in-law] because after 700 chapters, no family elders are introduced, and both parents of the three MLs are deceased.

10mth
1
Leezy_SeLv2

Im just bet curious who is her husband? Yuchan or yishan?why all of them call them wife?please be specific.. Don't ruin the story, like that..i don't quite understand, who's her real husband there

11mth
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