The MC's personality really ruined this for me That said the story is a good idea and is well written with only a little bit of editing needed.

This is a very ridiculous use of the idea of ​​democracy and libation in a fantasy medieval society,🤣. who has an almost immortal lifespan. Are there people who want a strong and almost immortal person to be led by someone who is weaker than them and has a short lifespan? And MCs like SJWs who pretend to be king👑 😂

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I like that author put our MC to thousand years before doom of Valyria and I like powers that author gave him, I just hope that this fic wont end early and MC wont be a charming savior. This fic has just one disadvantage in moy opinion - two MCs names, his Earth name and his current name. Ideas for fic, I hope that his dragon will have a bit of MCs power

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the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story

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I can’t wait for the next chapter to read