Thanks for this book, here's my review after reading 109 chapters. The premise of the story is really good, I like your system panel. The attributes are simple and easy to understand, while aslo being straight forward; HP Mana Strength Constitution Agility Spirit The book as a whole is improving with every chapters. The tier system is good (F to SSS, then supreme is above all, then similar settings gs for weapon grade from Medicore to Mythical, and Supreme is above all). Honestly, you have a good settings for this book. The only 2 challenges I see that needs major Improvements is the maths and the explanation of System Stats. ************************************* 1) Lets stars the the maths, 10% mana recovery per sec is an OP talent. Meaning the more powerful the person, the more powerful this talent will proof to be. At high level, the person with this talent will have pretty much infinite mana even without magic gears. Imagine one with 20k mana, regenerating 2000 mana every secs. All spells below SSS will be a peace of cake to spam as long as the skill mastery is high enough to negate the cooldown. 2) Many of the effects of items are ignored, for example, 50% resource and consumption, 50% skill cool down are literally forgotten. If a person skill cooldown is 300 mins (5 hrs) and it cost 2000 mana to cast. After that effect, it is supposed to cost half the mana (1000 mana) and cooldown should be cut down to 2.5hrs. Meaning all low tier skill should be instat cast, like Howard's F rank skills. We have seen it takes like one sec to cast. With that, he should be able to cast at least 2 to 3 per secs. There is a lot to say about the maths, like the buff passive in his equipment, and so on. **************************************** For the Stat system; It's si.ple and easy to understand but what we don't know is the guage LG the stats. From Howard stats as a level 1, we know human stats is between 1 and 10. But how do the stats correlates to the physical world? What would someone with a 300 point in constitution be like? Can he survive a gun shot? A bomb explosion? How fast is someone with a 20 point in agility is? How strong is a person with 30 strength is? All we see is equipment dishing out stats like + 300 agility, + 500 strength....but yet there is no Improvement in speed or physical power. All we see is that they do more damage, well summarized, but we don't see it for ourselves. The damage output remains the same regardless how high the stats is. We know Howard gets stronger but if you have noticed from his F tier skill, his damage remains around 1700 points per hit. He constantly gets increase in his spirit Stata from equipments and his soul theft/nurture skill but we don't see it. *************************************** To be honest, there is a bit of Improvement in the recent chapters, but then again everything falls to the maths. In summary, here is my input; We are still in the early phase of the book, so these things can still be reworked. The maths specifically, needs massive improvement. The stats system needs better improvement, let us see how effective: - someone with a 300 point in constitution tanks - how fast someone with a 300 agility can move. Will they move as fast as sound, cause sonic boom? - will 300 point in strength shatter large structures? Things like these makes growth show. If you consider the stats given by Howard equipments, you find out he has more stats in his physique than even physical combatants. His spirit sense now should be over a 1000 or somewhere in the 900s. Last we saw was at 800s, but that was before his later equipments and level ups. But what effect do high stats in spirit brings? I love what you did in the recent chapters in this regard, by giving more control to mage's skill when there is a increase in spirit stats. But I expected their perception should be insanely high also. To be honest, if a regular human or a lvl 1 awakened stats is between 1 and 10, stats from 300+ should already be able to crush mountains or at least small structures, like making large craters on ground from share physical hits or massive damageto structures with spells. That's a large increase. Thanks for the novel, I'm hoping to see more improvement. It's just an advice, you're doing good recently though.
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LIKEWould be nice if you had someone helping you with the stats maths but that depends on who is willing...
I am very certain that if you make major updates to those 2 criteria, there will be a massive improvement. Honestly, that's what this book lacks currently. Every other thing will come up slowly, and naturally after those two gets an improvement.
This review is absolutely correct
Yeah level 30+ requires in the billions of EXP, considering a level 27 silver boss only gives ~5000 the mc is going to have to kill millions of level 90+ supreme rank dragons to hit level 100.
Is there any change or improvement on this problem?
I’d also like to know
I took a break for a while, just waiting for the chapters to pile up. But where I stopped, there haven't been much changes on the maths (in relating to the stats). Also, we still don't know much about the stats, all we see is the MC stats and talks of how powerful a level 70 is. But so far, if there aren't any massive boost on Tiers upgrade, the MC should be any weaker that these level 70 and that's where the maths problem is. It's not properly done. It may have been better now, I'm speaking based on chp 170 and prior chapters.
It's a very very very slow progress. Not sure if there is much improvement right now. But I'm only talking based on where I reap up to before taking a break, chapter 170 ~ 180; Stary Map arc
Considering Howard's stats, regular stats increments (from items and skills), buffs, most specifically the percentage buffs from items and skills, his stats should already be at the level of 70 ~ 90 depending on what is active or equipment he wears. But 🙅♂️, it's just sad. That's why I said unless there are massive boosts in stats from level 60s upward, MC shouldn't be any weaker than those level 70 at base without his new hybrid form.
Even the author doesn't know what he's doing right now cuz I'm now as confused as he is because this book just went into another world altogether and the MC loses everything and doesn't even care
completely agree on this. I stopped at like chapter 230 or so (I don't even remember anymore) and just based on chapter titles alone, the next 100 or 150 still have him in this other world without even going back to the other two he came from!? like when is it all gonna come back to his home and the other people??
