Reading_Dao_Peak

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

This novel suffers from lazy writing. The author uses crazy reasons to justify the characters actions. Doesn't use zombie summons because they're gross? Really? In a dog eat dog world where it's implied people are killed out of envy the MC is worried about how gross his summon is? Also there being the 6th SS rank awakening in history at his school isn't a huge major event? She should be the main character because the current one is already written like a girl. Also, the grammar really needs work.

None of this is how this would work at all 😭 at least not in the US and most other countries don't allow anyone to have guns 😭😭 plus an m4 with full attachments would be way more than 3k 😭😭

Before anyone reads this novel, the character will always be referred to as "upbeat" young man. It's kinda comical at the beginning because he's in terrible situations and still referred to as "upbeat" but by the 10th chapter it's just unbearable. There's quite a few grammar and spelling errors, but that's quite common on here. The story really doesn't flow well and there's no depth to the MC at all. He doesn't question anything and makes dumb decisions.

You don't have to use his name but "upbeat" is not even accurate most of the time you're using it. On the verge of death? "Upbeat" In a new strange place? "Upbeat" lost in a spacial anomaly? "Upbeat" in none of these situations should anyone be "upbeat".

The synopsis is so misleading. The MC is dumb as rocks. Worst of all, every chapter ends with "to be connecting..." which I assume means "to be continued" but makes 0 sense in a Webnovel where people know there will be another chapter. I'm 20 chapters in and although the MC has made a literal sentient AI, he's not questioned or tried to understand it at all and instead has used it to give him some common sense he's so lacking. It literally tells him "I'm using a satellite to track someone's location" and his only response is "will I get arrested" "no" "okay cool". HUH? Doesn't explore anything this new AI he made can do and only uses it for dating advice. Dumb as rocks, skip this one for your blood pressure.

This is so unnecessary and not even spelled right

He killed and gathered 18 spirits already, it's only 5 chapters in and author is forgetting things

This book is a mess, you would need one of those old school detective boards with photos and rope to make any sort of sense of it. Constantly flashbacks and time changes that are poorly explained make understanding the plot an exercise in futility.

He was "half step" level 6 which means right on the edge but still a level 5, now he will be a full level 6.