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Miki_Marlo75
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2023-10-01 06:27

I like the story it's going on a slow path but that's good I hope it doesn't jump too fast in the timeline and has more development We just have to wait for other chapters and see what comes out.

Adventure Time: Shadow Elemental(Ownership has been handed over)

SirRandom
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SirRandom
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Its been a long time and I've gotten much better at writing, but the first 15 or so chapters(some not posted yet) are kinda... bad(?), like they're ok, but just that, ok. I can write better now, when I say I've gotten better I mean it, to the point where I cant read other peoples stories without automatically being conscious of every mistake, inconsistency, bad piece of dialogue, bland character design and so on. Its a curse.

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Thorok_Thorok
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this is the second Adventure time fic on this app and for that tage these five stars

1yr
Supper_mega
Supper_megaLv4

more!!!! I'm obsessed with this fanfic especially the relationship of the mc and bubble gum

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aMz
aMzLv11

allthough it's too early to review i will just give you 5 stars, since i haven't seen any adventure time fanfics before and i hope you continue writing it and i will be checking out your other works on TheCartoonist

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PunchingDrywallMan
PunchingDrywallManLv4

The story is very entertaining I wish There's more chapters to it.

11mth
Lox_Of_Sins
Lox_Of_SinsLv4

Everything but update ability is good, am just waiting for more updates to get into this story more so I can judge if I want to give it a perfect 5/5.

1yr
General_Kenobi_0
General_Kenobi_0Lv4

there aren't many adventure time fanfictions, but I'm happy that the few that are out there have this one with them

1yr
ZephurosStormheart
ZephurosStormheartLv2

Well this has been a true breath of fresh air to read. The main character feels like he belongs in the world of Adventure Time, like he was always meant to be part of the story. The grammar is pretty good and the author is paying attention to the background of the series.

1yr
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