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2024-06-29 11:36

I feel like I'm watching Konoha being recreated in Kumo. What's the point of having the Uchiha in Kumo? The Uchiha has lived in the Land of Fire for thousands of years and they agreed to move just like that? Why not retrieve the Land of Lightning's Chinoike Clan whom they banished to the Land of Hot Water? It's like I'm reading Konoha all over again, all the interesting parts of Kumo are stripped and replaced with Konoha Dojutsu, Itachi and Shisui. Shisui is basically an idiot and Itachi is not himself. The Uchiha is an evil clan and they deserved to be wiped out, and Itachi here is too lacking in resolve. The part with Yugito Nii giving him tailed Chakra is interesting, but it went downhill the moment he proposed to take away Hinata, it really doesn't make sense that Hiashi would make the direct descendant of the main family leave the Land of Fire even when cornered, but at least this part was feasable.

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