Of the worst plots the Chinese could come up with, they really have a serious problem with deities and systems, well considering their politics it's obvious.

I liked it a lot so I thought instead of waiting i'll go and read the mtl. That was a terrible mistake, the story is good but you'll get a heart attack reading it, so I suggest waiting for the translator to slowly update it as it is much better

I think the author watched a short You Tube video about One Piece and deemed himself an expert. Also, making people aware of betrayals has 0 consequence and characters forget things from one paragraph to the next. An example of this is the Screen shows Nami with the Straw Hats in the Grand Line, yet Arlong isn't even bothered. Maybe he's like "I'm sure that the girl I've enslaved for 10 years left peacefully with that crew capable of killing every singe one of my crewmates in one strike. No need to bother her now."

a very intriguing start to the work, I hope the translation won’t be abandoned (I used Google Translate) [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This story has nothing that can be salvaged apart from the translation, yet its plot is terrible. and ridiculous.................................

Everything, except Writing Quality and Character Design is a 3. It's a translated novel with a plot that could be best described as a multi-level, reality-breaking reaction video. If you want a story that you can immerse yourself in, this isn't for you, but if you want a somewhat fulfilling/funny story, then this may be for you.

good novel I hope you will continue it and not stop writing this novel............................................................................................

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A nice and chill story to read when u just want to have a fun time and nothing to serious. [img=recommend]

Its decent. Its obviously a chinese translation. A lot of stuff that makes no sense. For example traveling between places takes almost no time for some reason. Also the broadcast just arbitrarily stops and starts for no reason. (shows a couple of fights in succession but then suddenly stops when Luffy travels for a day to rescue a crewmate.) TLDR: Decent chinese translation but turn of your brain when it comes to plot/logic.