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2024-02-21 00:49

well so far I don't like the FL. Maybe because she is from wealthy family, she is a bit naive, lack common sense about outside world or more accuratly ignorant most of common sense, she stubborn but in a way the pride of being a young wealthy lady like those pampered princess in ancient time. The author said she is a bit smart in school but in my opinion it just about memorized (well most people like this), rarely able to comprehend and apply it what they learn or improved from it, or being innovative. and about her lame excuse, well it still alright, And for other character at least bearable, especially ML he is observant and most of it used his knowledge and being innovative sometimes.

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