at the end of the day this is a story about very wealthy people able to survive the apocalypse because they are very wealthy people. I got about 26 chapters in and there's not much personality development in all of the characters. currently the building is flooded up to the third floor or so and our main characters are going to install security doors so that no one can come to their apartment because screw those people right? there's been no discussion in the narrative about government shutdown or emergency measures being taken or anything like that. somehow they are flooded up to the third floor but electricity is still going. and there's no Mass organization about how to organize the people on the lower floors. it was all just stay in this haunted apartment lol screw you guys. there are a few grammar mistakes but they are very very minor so not super distracting at all. at the end of the day regardless of how wealthy these people are when people run out of food and water no security door is going to keep them out and it just doesn't make sense to me that none of this is being discussed yet when the flood levels have already risen that much. you can only ignore a group of hungry desperate people for so long before things erupt into chaos. but none of that is being discussed. instead it's just all giggles and playing around and installing security doors to keep the people who are too poor to buy an apartment higher up out. in spite of the fact that our female lead has enough supplies to last her 15 lifetimes during the apocalypse and her special little space. long story short this is okay for a fast read if you have nothing else to do but it's not very high quality work
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can you recommend me high quality work ?
mary sue , mother of all....if you were in her position you'd have done worst .. I don't think you've read about apocalypse before right ??? people's morality is long gone ,they can kill for food and you expect her to feed morally corrupted people and entitled fools that doesn't know anything except to complain and everyone and everything else
to complain *about* everything and everyone else **
Symply_Abisola:mary sue , mother of all....if you were in her position you'd have done worst .. I don't think you've read about apocalypse before right ??? people's morality is long gone ,they can kill for food and you expect her to feed morally corrupted people and entitled fools that doesn't know anything except to complain and everyone and everything else
She gave her opinion so there’s really no need for you to come at her with all this violence,personally I have issues with this type of novels too because I don’t know how the characters can be okay with starving children when they have spares they can give,I’m unlocking this chapters with my coins,you don’t get to force your opinion on other people
Symply_Abisola:mary sue , mother of all....if you were in her position you'd have done worst .. I don't think you've read about apocalypse before right ??? people's morality is long gone ,they can kill for food and you expect her to feed morally corrupted people and entitled fools that doesn't know anything except to complain and everyone and everything else
And who told you everyone can kill for food in the Apocalypse,in the end we’re all humans
Symply_Abisola:mary sue , mother of all....if you were in her position you'd have done worst .. I don't think you've read about apocalypse before right ??? people's morality is long gone ,they can kill for food and you expect her to feed morally corrupted people and entitled fools that doesn't know anything except to complain and everyone and everything else
that's actually because you don't know how low people's morality are and I hope you never get to know that people are heartless I'm not attacking anyone ..i just think that if you don't like something move on .. it's not by force to read it but just don't belittle others efforts
its_rynnie13:And who told you everyone can kill for food in the Apocalypse,in the end we’re all humans
