Well written with very negligible grammatical errors. The plot is good. Updates are stable. Story development sometimes staggers, but it's ok. Keep up the good work.
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LIKETeri Randi maa apni chut fad di bhikari se chod khati he...tu madarchod ka bacha tatti khake peda hua he..Teri Gand fad dunga samne Mila toh...Teri Gand me ek hulk ghusa dunga...tatti v Teri band ho jaegi gandi nali ka kida .sala sadap cha bhikari tatti khane wala bhikari