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Dxr_Xrd
Dxr_XrdLv21yr
2024-03-22 21:01

Well written with very negligible grammatical errors. The plot is good. Updates are stable. Story development sometimes staggers, but it's ok. Keep up the good work.

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Obvlion
ObvlionLv2

Chinese fictions ka copy he madarchod..lauda janta he tu..ja mtl me ye story he adha .. madarchod ka bacha kuch janta he kya tu..sala kitna I'd he tera

Dxr_Xrd
Dxr_XrdLv2

Abe chutya, tere asli baap lagta hai chinese hai, bhikari ke alut.

Obvlion:Chinese fictions ka copy he madarchod..lauda janta he tu..ja mtl me ye story he adha .. madarchod ka bacha kuch janta he kya tu..sala kitna I'd he tera
Obvlion
ObvlionLv2

Teri Randi maa apni chut fad di bhikari se chod khati he...tu madarchod ka bacha tatti khake peda hua he..Teri Gand fad dunga samne Mila toh...Teri Gand me ek hulk ghusa dunga...tatti v Teri band ho jaegi gandi nali ka kida .sala sadap cha bhikari tatti khane wala bhikari

Dxr_Xrd:Abe chutya, tere asli baap lagta hai chinese hai, bhikari ke alut.
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