Item: Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe
Rating: 3
Author: Mann_Teufortian

Mann_TeufortianLv41yr

2024-04-12 07:45

This fanfic is really not that great. The MC just gets whatever he wants right off the bat, the very definition of a silver spoon. Free system? okay, that's fine. But he literally gets the super soldier serum in the first chapters to cut the amount of training he has to do. House gets wrecked? Lucky Tony is a real estate agent! but that's not all... the characters are way off: the author treats Iron Man like a maid. Tony Stark is a friend of the MC's family, and he'll bend over backwards to spoonfeed him exposition and give him everything he wants for free. The MC even feels comfortable ordering him around, and Tony just takes it. the writing is mostly fine apart from a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but the character interactions are just so robotic it's not fun at all to read. 20 chapters at the time of review

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