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meHzyk
meHzykLv41yr
2024-01-17 03:52

good proposal I read some chapters and there are some cliché ideas but I don't hate the "cliché" I just hate it when it's done wrong. but I must say that you missed the chance to make a unique character with Whitebeard's characteristics, "ah but he's giant" simple make a plot of him being a genetic mutation, there is also the question of the name, I could use Whitebeard's name, it's very unique and cool. (I wrote using the translator on my keyboard)

Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe

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I'm only giving it one star. I've heard it's a thing now.

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Why John Wick? what's wrong with Edward Newgate?

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Tim_QQQ
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well written and no huge redflags (like other people in the story knowing that he is not from this universe like the ancient one). the mc himself hasn't seemed to create goals outside of getting more powerful, which is fine albeit a little boring. I like the character interactions, conversations are written in a way that is interesting. so long as the stability of updates remains consistent than it should shape up to be a good novel.

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