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Moawar
MoawarLv11yr
2023-09-16 01:51

I'm conflicted, on one hand It shows that you're really trying with the story and it does have potencial, but on the other hand there are some questionable writing decisions like "Name: What they are saying." I don't know if I could vibe with that, also, It may just be me, but you might be going a little bit too fast with the pacing, again, it might just be me.

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xish101
xish101Author

Thank you for your honest review, since It's my first story, And my second week, I'll consider updating the narrations and things you've mentioned over time, Again, Thank you very much!

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