I'm the author, Many people appreciated my work for its simplicity and commonly pointed out that typos are the only flaw in my book, Gladly I have resolved it all with an app. If you find something serious, Let me know by pointing it out. Thank you for taking your precious time to read my book.

it's a mixed feeling after reading some... The story rocks...awesome..enigmatic story. development is quite fast. It begins with a mysterious being getting greedy and then its mysterious rebirth...it's all so exciting... The writing style can improve..I mean the more you revise your chapters, the more scopes of improvement you will find... However, it does not obstruct the awesome flow of the story...It's not stagnant at all...it's always changing and flowing...and the flowing river has good water... So, this will be an excellent piece if the author keeps sharpening and revising his work. I have added to my library and I will keep reading.

Out of all the novels I've review swap, this was the best. The writing, the names do not suck. Keep it up

Impressive way of expressing with words. I write too do check it out

As mentioned earlier by many other readers the book is great and has a lot of interesting plots. The same goes for me. Bu, it is kind of confusing how three people will pay a role. Will their fate be copied as the MC? Or will there be a twist to turn a crush into a new world? This is quite an amazing book one has made. A growing tree. Keep it up, author. Be happy with all that you hear.

So many emotions, you got me there. . I love your story, I'm just starting it and so far it gripped me, from the backstory to the main story and the part about the fire😫😫.. . My poor heart

FIVE FOOOKIN STARS MATE!!! Story and word flow: Excellent! Development: Perfect! MC: Do I need to say anything to that? Your story is captivating and immediately pulled me in. I saw some mistakes but they are easily sweeped by the strong flow of the story! Keep posting Author, and I'll keep reading. Added to my Collection! Hmmm, what else can I say? Maybe just that this story is going to be BIG! Peace :)

I feel that the progression of the story was too fast for me to delve into the feeling. There are writing corrections too, but nothing that Grammarly or any writing tool can't help edit. As for the character design, I'm confused. I'm not sure whose story I am reading now, though the name Zerexs has a nice ring to it, I guess it needs more foundation. Like building his character first before progressing the story. His backstory was confusing me too, I'm not sure what the timeline is but every chapter felt like a different timeline, but the timeline is in the wrong order. Still, I can see potential.

l just started reading this book a day ago and I am enjoying it. l just love how the author writes and made it enjoyable to us readers. I'm really hooked up in these book and so far it's awesome .

One word: SWEET!!!I just love the way the MC is determined to protect the ones precious to him even though he's not exactly a good example of compassionate. Keep up the good work 👍