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GMSJakers
GMSJakersLv11yr
2023-09-10 00:30

I'd say the book does a great job at starting off the reader excited, however, the way the scenes jump is a bit disorienting, but nonetheless good descriptions.

The Divine Core

Chiyo Kobayashi
4.7
91 Chs

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NewbieJimjim
NewbieJimjimLv3

I kinda agree with you

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dipdipdipdip
dipdipdipdipLv4

Hello Author, I guess this will be a hit. The synopsis was luring us to read more. As a fan who likes to read in this genre, finding new works is a never-ending saga. So of course, I am gonna keep this in my library and keep reading this.Let's see what will happen in the future.

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This_is_Agustino
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Hi Author! I really mean it when I say that this is one of the best fantasy novels of the modern era. The pacing is just right for me. Your writing style and character and world building quality is amazing. The plot twists are always impeccable, and I love how you're not afraid to do unthinkable things to your characters. Keep writing, man. Don't you stop![img=update]

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itsShonali
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I'll be honest. I don't read novels of this genre but I wanted to trying something new and picked it up. This is an interesting novel with extremely intriguing characters. The main character's past, his existence is a mystery that I am eager to uncover. This writing quality is really nice and I enjoyed reading the first eight chapters. Keep up the good work, author!

1yr
Emmanuelfeany
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A good book with interesting plot. Author has a way of making us visualize the fighting scenes. Looking up for more chapters.

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Billurigan
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The writing is really good, the characters are decent. There are only 5 chaps currently but a pretty good novel so far.

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marvel_away
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It is an interesting take on the daemons. The first five chapters did a good job introducing the main character. Will like to read more chapters in the coming days.

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MS_Studio_3460
MS_Studio_3460Lv3

to be honest I have not read all the chapter but when i read the first chapter it was truly amazing.

9mth
TheATK
TheATKLv3

now Kai Has been through tough times and the way you put him out there is something I really emulate, something I think I'll try on one of my characters in the new book I'm working on. Over all it's a great book, five stars from me😊

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mina_jinhoo
mina_jinhooLv2

I started by reading the sypnosis and it caught my attention by the first paragraph. 8 then went on to read the first chapters and was completely hooked by the first chapter. The grammar is perfect and the charecter used in this story are completely captivating and interesting. There are so many words I can use to express this story but it is absolutely amazing. Keep up the great work

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DD_TheDreamer
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This is a really nice storyline with an interesting world. the grammar is great, the power scaling is simply unique and I love the fight scenes. Good job, Author.

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