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2024-01-06 15:39

Well, for a novice author the story is quite good, but the characters do not have a consistent character, the story goes too quickly, although the pace is not great. The main character cares too much about his appearance, why? Was he a model in a past life or something? There are still some moments that confuse me, but the story is quite suitable to pass the time, because the plot itself is quite interesting)

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Bibongsensei
BibongsenseiLv4

do you think only model care for they're appearance?

RosoviyR
RosoviyRLv2

Mostly, yes. Although it is more correct to say a narcissist or just a person who is crazy about his appearance...

Bibongsensei:do you think only model care for they're appearance?
diabolic_diablo
diabolic_diabloLv3

Every normal functioning living human has atleast a modicum of desire to look desirable, even if it's a passing thought there is no one who did not think so once or twice. Only people not looking as good as they wish to be delude themselves into thinking apperance does not matter, humans are at their base face controlling creatures.💀 unless you have money- just swipe and catch gold diggers easily ig then

RosoviyR:Mostly, yes. Although it is more correct to say a narcissist or just a person who is crazy about his appearance...
RosoviyR
RosoviyRLv2

🙈 another person who thinks that the face of the most important fortune in the world, which will take you anywhere, can, which saddens me, that you cannot feel for yourself how useless it really is to have all the “desirable” qualities, just being a little above average, and the rest depends on your abilities) (I’m not taking into account the really beautiful people, they are really lucky, well, there are only 0.00001 such people in the whole world)

diabolic_diablo:Every normal functioning living human has atleast a modicum of desire to look desirable, even if it's a passing thought there is no one who did not think so once or twice. Only people not looking as good as they wish to be delude themselves into thinking apperance does not matter, humans are at their base face controlling creatures.💀 unless you have money- just swipe and catch gold diggers easily ig then
diabolic_diablo
diabolic_diabloLv3

When did I ever state face is the most important feature in a person? Yes it is an important part in choosing your loved one but it certainly is not the focus. Also if someone is average in all basic qualities and appearance then they have certain traits that set them apart from others, things like muscles, art, music or even sports. There are also people who are average with no qualities making them stand out yet they have their own thoughts and in some cases charm that enable them to woo women and some rare cases getting a partner whose physical qualities may be above average yet their intellect not so high and vice versa , I don't understand why you are so adamant in denying that face matters, dont twist my words into stating that it is he most important quality as I have said already. As for those super beautiful people you mention, they end up as celebrities or in same cases married to people with money who like them. Saying that face does not matter is false. Face, personality, behaviour are the defining features that make the first impression on a person so all are important even if in the end personality is most cases remains as the most important, that does not in any way mean that face is not important. If someone is above average in face but average in other areas then for the other average potential life partners they hold an edge over the rest of the dating competition due to their traits as previously mentioned and this case the face.

RosoviyR:🙈 another person who thinks that the face of the most important fortune in the world, which will take you anywhere, can, which saddens me, that you cannot feel for yourself how useless it really is to have all the “desirable” qualities, just being a little above average, and the rest depends on your abilities) (I’m not taking into account the really beautiful people, they are really lucky, well, there are only 0.00001 such people in the whole world)
diabolic_diablo
diabolic_diabloLv3

Anyhow no point in arguing over differing perspectives as I will stand by my words and I assume you will too so instead of a stand off in a book review section peace, agree to disagree and all that bye-bye

RosoviyR:🙈 another person who thinks that the face of the most important fortune in the world, which will take you anywhere, can, which saddens me, that you cannot feel for yourself how useless it really is to have all the “desirable” qualities, just being a little above average, and the rest depends on your abilities) (I’m not taking into account the really beautiful people, they are really lucky, well, there are only 0.00001 such people in the whole world)
RosoviyR
RosoviyRLv2

let's consider the topic closed, my English is not good enough to continue the dialogue with you

diabolic_diablo:When did I ever state face is the most important feature in a person? Yes it is an important part in choosing your loved one but it certainly is not the focus. Also if someone is average in all basic qualities and appearance then they have certain traits that set them apart from others, things like muscles, art, music or even sports. There are also people who are average with no qualities making them stand out yet they have their own thoughts and in some cases charm that enable them to woo women and some rare cases getting a partner whose physical qualities may be above average yet their intellect not so high and vice versa , I don't understand why you are so adamant in denying that face matters, dont twist my words into stating that it is he most important quality as I have said already. As for those super beautiful people you mention, they end up as celebrities or in same cases married to people with money who like them. Saying that face does not matter is false. Face, personality, behaviour are the defining features that make the first impression on a person so all are important even if in the end personality is most cases remains as the most important, that does not in any way mean that face is not important. If someone is above average in face but average in other areas then for the other average potential life partners they hold an edge over the rest of the dating competition due to their traits as previously mentioned and this case the face.
RosoviyR
RosoviyRLv2

🤝

diabolic_diablo:Anyhow no point in arguing over differing perspectives as I will stand by my words and I assume you will too so instead of a stand off in a book review section peace, agree to disagree and all that bye-bye
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