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A4KL
A4KLAuthor1yr
2023-09-01 15:26

AUTHOR NOTE :Hope all of you like my original work,It has nothing to do with any pre-existing novels,name used in it is randomly choosen by your favourite AUTHOR-kun...

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Minahil_Ashraf
Minahil_AshrafLv4

please release more chapters dailythe story is quite interesting. I like your story very much

A4KL
A4KLAuthor

Tomorrow will my exams end, and after a day's rest on 18th, chapters will release for all three novels daily,

Minahil_Ashraf:please release more chapters dailythe story is quite interesting. I like your story very much
TSUKI
TSUKILv4

How long do you plan to make this novel?

A4KL:Tomorrow will my exams end, and after a day's rest on 18th, chapters will release for all three novels daily,
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A4KL
A4KLAuthor

until December 2023 and then it all depends on its performance

TSUKI:How long do you plan to make this novel?
theyasuke_
theyasuke_Lv4

the synopsis is too long

A4KL
A4KLAuthor

Sorry I just copy paste my second Chapter, I will shorten it in a while

theyasuke_:the synopsis is too long
Vainglory0
Vainglory0Lv4

How large is the harem going to be? You don't have to say the exact number. Giving a rough estimate is fine.

A4KL
A4KLAuthor

Maximum is 7, atleast in Volume 2 ,I don't know about Volume 3 though, but I will not make readers confuse by adding Pokemon game.

Vainglory0:How large is the harem going to be? You don't have to say the exact number. Giving a rough estimate is fine.
Vainglory0
Vainglory0Lv4

But not all 7 will be vital to the story right? Like they will be a part of the story but won't make their appearance all the time. There's bound to be one or two who or more important than the others right?

A4KL:Maximum is 7, atleast in Volume 2 ,I don't know about Volume 3 though, but I will not make readers confuse by adding Pokemon game.
A4KL
A4KLAuthor

umm, Not gonna spoil but, after reading this story pace , reader must have already understood the world better and atleast every bit of secrets that was written in novel was revealed but, this world is not a novel where one can just read and not feel, Zeph may have read the whole novel but his arrival hav already caused everything to change, in his journey he will make Heroine fall in love and with their journey they will face many enemies , together that is, It may sound cringe but all the characters name you have already known Like Valeriana, Thalia, Alora, Alisia , they are vital ones but others will have major screen time. And whatever happens will depend on how story progress but I will make sure not to make you bore, Also Zeph will fall in love too.

Vainglory0:But not all 7 will be vital to the story right? Like they will be a part of the story but won't make their appearance all the time. There's bound to be one or two who or more important than the others right?
Vainglory0
Vainglory0Lv4

Alright. I don't like reading harem novels much but I will give this one a try. As long as it's done well, even I can enjoy a harem once in a while.

A4KL:umm, Not gonna spoil but, after reading this story pace , reader must have already understood the world better and atleast every bit of secrets that was written in novel was revealed but, this world is not a novel where one can just read and not feel, Zeph may have read the whole novel but his arrival hav already caused everything to change, in his journey he will make Heroine fall in love and with their journey they will face many enemies , together that is, It may sound cringe but all the characters name you have already known Like Valeriana, Thalia, Alora, Alisia , they are vital ones but others will have major screen time. And whatever happens will depend on how story progress but I will make sure not to make you bore, Also Zeph will fall in love too.
Bushra_Altaf
Bushra_AltafLv4

one think i hate about this type of novel is that the mc fall in love the girls that kill them i mean i know the the one they kill is previous guy but acting rudely or someone looks doesn't mean you could just kill them

A4KL
A4KLAuthor

Life of a nobleman is not that easy it seems, imagine if she married him, it was mentioned his personality was trash, if he bullied her on the name of his power, what could a mere viscount do.I can't explain but she is a noblewoman and they have different way to live the life, Previous Zeph was not an angel, he beat maids and remove his anger on servants.

Bushra_Altaf:one think i hate about this type of novel is that the mc fall in love the girls that kill them i mean i know the the one they kill is previous guy but acting rudely or someone looks doesn't mean you could just kill them
DaoistsZYgr4
DaoistsZYgr4Lv4

did mc mother is in harem,?

DaoistxMqPVe
DaoistxMqPVeLv2

Is MC a pure villain? Like killing and sacrificing people, manipulating heroins to fall in love with him so that he can use them, etc. In short, he sees them as mere characters. Is this the mc? Or what type? You said "dark villain".. can you explain?

A4KL
A4KLAuthor

This is a comedy-drama and vast world-based novel, with engaging plots and each character having their own background story, making it the choice of more than 3k readers, MC is easygoing and will fall in love. Read this for a light mood, and for dark MC read my another novel called revenge of the villain

DaoistxMqPVe:Is MC a pure villain? Like killing and sacrificing people, manipulating heroins to fall in love with him so that he can use them, etc. In short, he sees them as mere characters. Is this the mc? Or what type? You said "dark villain".. can you explain?
_hallow_killer_
_hallow_killer_Lv4

from wherein can I read 1st volume of the book

A4KL:This is a comedy-drama and vast world-based novel, with engaging plots and each character having their own background story, making it the choice of more than 3k readers, MC is easygoing and will fall in love. Read this for a light mood, and for dark MC read my another novel called revenge of the villain
A4KL
A4KLAuthor

?

_hallow_killer_:from wherein can I read 1st volume of the book
jmori2010
jmori2010Lv15

The second volume starts on chapter 69, so the first volume consists of chapters 1-68.

_hallow_killer_:from wherein can I read 1st volume of the book
Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Are you dumb or something? You ask readers to read until volume 2 for the story to get good? Really? That’s 68 chapters. Might as well rewrite the first volume.

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A4KL
A4KLAuthor

Hello readers, if you still exist and have any interest in this book, I am spinning this review to let everyone know that this story has received a remake. However, it's not that simple to explain the reason, given how I had already thought about this before writing the novel. Due to circumstances, like not being able to earn enough money to feed myself, I dropped it—yes, it's true. But there is already a book that starts anew with the old world and concept, though it features an enhanced version of every background story, with no hidden elements and a fully focused main character. To explain what happened and why the world changed, along with the main character's name, here is the explanation: According to the ending of the story, Zeph died inside the hidden realm, and Evangeline, who was battling against the Supreme Creator, was unable to save her son once again, just as she had previously lost him at the hands of Adriannel. Her mind spun in guilt over being used once again as a mere character for the entertainment of the Creator. This prompted her to use her full strength and break the seal of reality, opening the doors to alternate worlds and timelines. From the start, she created a world where, even though she had fallen into eternal slumber, she was able to bring her son back to that world. As mentioned in the original story, Zeph is originally the son of Evangeline, and in future chapters, it was about to be revealed how the Zeph who originally transmigrated had a piece of a soul part scattered throughout the multiverse inside of him. After his death in the hidden realm, that piece shattered and vanished. However, since it was just a piece, other fragments existed in different worlds. Evangeline, being able to use her strength, opened the same dimension to another world where she found another soul piece of her son living a life. With her own hand, she brought him back to the alternate timeline reality, but this time much earlier so her son could become strong enough in her absence. So the story mentioned below is kind of related to "Fat Villain," while at the same time, it is not. You will definitely find most of the character stories similar, but much more detailed. You can say the story is similar to at least 30%—so it is not a remake, but more likely a tribute.

Gompank
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