Review Detail of Purple_Midnight in Shards of the Broken Heart

Item: Shards of the Broken Heart
Rating: 5

Review detail

Purple_MidnightLv1311mthPurple_Midnight

Story starts off a little dark so if you aren't quite the type to enjoy that type of stuff I recommend you brace yourself before reading. The grammar is good, but my one major criticism to the author is to space out the paragraphs. No one likes to read giant lumps of text over and over again.

Shards of the Broken Heart

Grispera

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GrisperaAuthorGrispera

I have gradually improved in my writing, and so have improved the spacings as I improved. Please bear with it for some chapters.

11mth

B0mbaCl0ckModeratorB0mbaCl0ck

It already improved, just bear with it for a bit and it will be fixed. Keep giving feedback like this, since this author is receptive and takes it into account.

11mth

Metallica961Lv2Metallica961

is the harem in the future helpless? they can only rely on the mc without being able to provide anything?

8mth

GrisperaAuthorGrispera

No. They become stronger, too. And are not like the 'ones riding on MC's coattails'.

Metallica961:is the harem in the future helpless? they can only rely on the mc without being able to provide anything?

7mth