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Purple_Midnight
Purple_MidnightLv131yr
2023-09-30 01:23

Story starts off a little dark so if you aren't quite the type to enjoy that type of stuff I recommend you brace yourself before reading. The grammar is good, but my one major criticism to the author is to space out the paragraphs. No one likes to read giant lumps of text over and over again.

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Grispera
GrisperaAuthor

I have gradually improved in my writing, and so have improved the spacings as I improved. Please bear with it for some chapters.

B0mbaCl0ck
B0mbaCl0ckModerator

It already improved, just bear with it for a bit and it will be fixed. Keep giving feedback like this, since this author is receptive and takes it into account.

Metallica961
Metallica961Lv2

is the harem in the future helpless? they can only rely on the mc without being able to provide anything?

Grispera
GrisperaAuthor

No. They become stronger, too. And are not like the 'ones riding on MC's coattails'.

Metallica961:is the harem in the future helpless? they can only rely on the mc without being able to provide anything?
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