Review Detail of wellappd in ARCANE REVERSAL

"The author only has 4 chapters released so far, but it's showing a lot of promise! Sure, there were a few minor grammatical errors, but they didn't really get in the way of my reading. One thing that might help is breaking up the paragraphs to make the reading flow even smoother, espeically after the dialogues. I absolutely loved the prologue; it really helped me get a feel for the world where Aei lives. Your storytelling is definitely comming along, and I'm digging the way you're building up the plot. It's got that perfect pace that makes me want to know what happens next. Keep doing what you're doing!"