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2023-12-12 09:35

I don't say this often but this work has no flaws. I'm not saying it's perfect. But it has no flaws✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

The First Soul (40k)

Matheu_DeWitt
4.6
43 Chs

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Matheu_DeWitt
Matheu_DeWittAuthor

Thanks for the review. I saw you reviewed twice so I deleted your previous one.

1yr
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Knights_Errant
Knights_ErrantLv3

You are quite talented at writing guardsman.Hmm? what's this? you are dropping the fic? That's understandabl... stand against that wall guardsman. *bang*

1yr

Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1

all I gotta say is the main character is not the main character but a plot device. dont read if you want a story about the main character. this story is just the authors retelling of war hammer lore witha bit of the au sprinkled in. bad story basically but hats just my incredibly good oppinion.

1yr
Yuna_sama
Yuna_samaLv5

Such a lovely change of pace compared to other 40k fanfics, I love it… I hope it keeps going. Definitely not what I was expecting from 40k lol.

1yr
PelerinliKeltos
PelerinliKeltosLv4

I'm extremely curious to see the main character's relationship with the Emperor of mankind.

1yr
Danny_Butts
Danny_ButtsLv4

why why must this be so God dang GOOD and so God dang SHORT !!! haha . . . sigh I suppose that's the trade off for both high quality chapters and daily updates huh 10 out of 10 do recommend

1yr
Holy_Sheep
Holy_SheepLv14

a great start to the story hope you continue it and don't drop it .....................................................................................

1yr
Dominic_Zibuda
Dominic_ZibudaLv4

This is probably the best book this month, and maybe these last few months. I hope it gets all the recognition it deserves.

1yr
Linus279
Linus279Lv4

Reveal spoiler

9mth
ManasCiel
ManasCielLv14

I don’t know much about the 40k universe but I found this enjoyable to read! Also the people complaining about the mc not being the mc are dumber than the korks, from what little I know about 40k, it is big with lots going on, so the author is setting up the world while also developing the characters of those he will use. Definitely worth a read! A try atleast!

12mth
moh999
moh999Lv6

this is an absolute gem, I loved reading every word of it, it's so rare to have a warhammer fiction on this app, let alone one so good, extra points for having zero romance, another point for sticking to the Lore as much as possible even if the war in heaven was never discussed as intensively as you have done, so in short.. Love It and Totally recommended

10mth
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