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Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv11yr
2023-12-21 05:19

all I gotta say is the main character is not the main character but a plot device. dont read if you want a story about the main character. this story is just the authors retelling of war hammer lore witha bit of the au sprinkled in. bad story basically but hats just my incredibly good oppinion.

The First Soul (40k)

Matheu_DeWitt
4.5
43 Chs

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Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1

with all the positive reviews this is getting with zero negative ones im suspicious that some stuff is being deleted but ill come back next month to see if it is deleted

1yr
9
Matheu_DeWitt
Matheu_DeWittAuthor

I've never deleted a review.

1yr
14
PelerinliKeltos
PelerinliKeltosLv4

Indeed, the story doesn't revolve around the main character. However, the story is about what kind of changes a good being is as powerful as the chaos gods can make in the 40k universe. At least that's what I'm reading for.

1yr
12
CaveSquirrel
CaveSquirrelLv4

"incredibly good opinion"

1yr
14
Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1

CaveSquirrel:"incredibly good opinion"
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1yr
2
Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1

I want you to say if an of my 'opinion' is not fact. Tell me that you are 75% blind in both eyes. Reveal to me your learning disability if you can tell me my very sound opinion is not 75% factual

CaveSquirrel:"incredibly good opinion"
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1yr
2
CaveSquirrel
CaveSquirrelLv4

Sounds like a you problem honestly.

Daz_Art:I want you to say if an of my 'opinion' is not fact. Tell me that you are 75% blind in both eyes. Reveal to me your learning disability if you can tell me my very sound opinion is not 75% factual
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1yr
9
Subsy
SubsyLv12

Someone can’t handle something different

Daz_Art:I want you to say if an of my 'opinion' is not fact. Tell me that you are 75% blind in both eyes. Reveal to me your learning disability if you can tell me my very sound opinion is not 75% factual
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1yr
5
Daz_Art
Daz_ArtLv1

its just he doesnt provide a solid arguement and I admit I got heated

Subsy:Someone can’t handle something different
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1yr
Subsy
SubsyLv12

Getting mad doesn’t win a argument bro, kinda makes you lose the argument even if your spitting facts before. The story isn’t for everyone but sometimes a change of pace is good.

Daz_Art:its just he doesnt provide a solid arguement and I admit I got heated
1yr
11
moh999
moh999Lv6

please continue , no , I order you to continue writing. pretty please with a cherry on top?!!!

Matheu_DeWitt:I've never deleted a review.
1yr
1
Matheu_DeWitt
Matheu_DeWittAuthor

Oof, I have to write now

moh999:please continue , no , I order you to continue writing. pretty please with a cherry on top?!!!
1yr
6
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Knights_Errant
Knights_ErrantLv3

You are quite talented at writing guardsman.Hmm? what's this? you are dropping the fic? That's understandabl... stand against that wall guardsman. *bang*

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Yuna_sama
Yuna_samaLv5

Such a lovely change of pace compared to other 40k fanfics, I love it… I hope it keeps going. Definitely not what I was expecting from 40k lol.

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PelerinliKeltos
PelerinliKeltosLv4

I'm extremely curious to see the main character's relationship with the Emperor of mankind.

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Danny_Butts
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why why must this be so God dang GOOD and so God dang SHORT !!! haha . . . sigh I suppose that's the trade off for both high quality chapters and daily updates huh 10 out of 10 do recommend

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Holy_Sheep
Holy_SheepLv14

a great start to the story hope you continue it and don't drop it .....................................................................................

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Dominic_Zibuda
Dominic_ZibudaLv4

This is probably the best book this month, and maybe these last few months. I hope it gets all the recognition it deserves.

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Linus279
Linus279Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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ManasCiel
ManasCielLv14

I don’t know much about the 40k universe but I found this enjoyable to read! Also the people complaining about the mc not being the mc are dumber than the korks, from what little I know about 40k, it is big with lots going on, so the author is setting up the world while also developing the characters of those he will use. Definitely worth a read! A try atleast!

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moh999
moh999Lv6

this is an absolute gem, I loved reading every word of it, it's so rare to have a warhammer fiction on this app, let alone one so good, extra points for having zero romance, another point for sticking to the Lore as much as possible even if the war in heaven was never discussed as intensively as you have done, so in short.. Love It and Totally recommended

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