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UelUel
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2023-10-06 22:17

Here's a 5 stars for your first review... Yay!!!... It's actually my first time reading a fanfiction. Actually, I'm not that familiar with the Novel's Extra, I only read a few chapters for reference since I started writing. Either way, this fanfic is mostly dialogue but it is still interesting, fun to read and it has a lot of potential for improvement. Keep working, Author.

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ShuriOc
ShuriOcAuthor

thank you very much for the review!!!. yes, i know that it's mostly dialogues I don't know how to change that. It's my first time even writing something. so if i try something i don't understand it gets really messy. I don't know how to write any romance or action scenes. It took so much thinking but, I got fed up with it and i settled with something simple.

ShuriOc
ShuriOcAuthor

The novel actually has a manhwa version. i found and finished the manhwa first then i got bored waiting so i read the novel.

TheAbyssMaster
TheAbyssMasterLv4

I recommended u to see the manhwa first and if you're bored waiting, you can go to the og nove, though i advice you to brace urself, some reader found it the Final scenario unacceptable. Opps sorry spoiler, anyway have a nice day!

shuriOC_alt
shuriOC_altLv1

thank you, and yes. I am the author using this alt account, just being prepared for the worst. I don't mind spoilers, they help me actually.

TheAbyssMaster:I recommended u to see the manhwa first and if you're bored waiting, you can go to the og nove, though i advice you to brace urself, some reader found it the Final scenario unacceptable. Opps sorry spoiler, anyway have a nice day!
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