i smell... A story! A story yet to be told! It's smiliar, It's almost the same, It's quite identical and yet it was... Different!

huuray to update! those two shuckas really need to learn those magic like fr fr so they won't get op real quick

You've caught my attention

where are you author? we Miss you

alright, I'm out. no particular reason, It's a good story.. for some.

that just how the author want their Character to be

how original

arrrrrghhhhh i knew it'll be the cliche troupe about Sealed Restriction! and you can't even increase your physical body?

i knew it

i've got a bad feeling about this...

That's rough buddy.. i wish the best for you, take care

you've returned... how's it goin' author?

MC lookin his sister be like:

Who are The misterius person that MC said in the end of dialogue? What will happened to Fontaine? Wait for the next chapter in dragonba- i mean, heavenly principle!

i feel u bro, because i myself was the same. I'm still feeling guility for abandoning those reader out there that might be waiting my ff or disappointed already. Sadly, i know i can never go back and make another one again. though, now i have little time and i can at least read and give my opinion to other author as to make sure they didn't fall and lost like others had sometimes..

Decent, sorry typo

First and foremost, i've seen many author trying to make "The Novel Extra" ff and almost all of them dropped, missing, gone, and lost even though many of them have descent and actually good plot/story. There's 2 ff that still ongoing and even that is taking too long for update (last update was like 1 or 2 month ago? Idk) So here's the thing, are sure you wanna go down this path? Or you're just making this ff because bored? Just want to make sure to not hoping to much on this.

Okay, i think i get the gist of it (?). The MC is indeed a father of a single daughter in this ff. Yada yada yada, the daughter wake up from her dream(past) and it seems she's now a maid? (Or something?) And she's also grown up now. Just my opinion, the grammar needs revision, just some word and the Use of dot symbols and such. Beside that, everything seems good. It's still first chapter so, keep up the good work author😤😤📣

A literall whole fanfic chapter summarized in one comment. You've got some talent i see

and again, this is just my honest opinion. maybe That's just what kind of fanfic u're trying to make, nothing personal. you can just ignore my opinion dear author, I'm just another passerby afterall.